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Blind To Me – A Haibun

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Blind To Me

 

Why don’t you see me

I carry the flag for you

How clear can it be

I am neither a spectre

Nor am I invisible

 

Christine Bolton – Poetry for Healing ©

 

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Spectre

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  11 comments for “Blind To Me – A Haibun”

  1. short-prose-fiction
    October 24, 2018 at 12:10 am

    Beautiful! Haibun … you are way ahead of me, Christine 🙂

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    • Christine Bolton
      October 24, 2018 at 12:12 am

      Oh not at all. 🙂 Sometimes I like those little shorties!!
      Thank you my friend

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      • short-prose-fiction
        October 24, 2018 at 12:13 am

        Haha! I am telling you: You are way ahead of me. I can’t write a haibun. You can 🙂

      • Christine Bolton
        October 24, 2018 at 8:56 am

        Yes you can! You only have to count syllables. Yours would be stunning like everything else you write. By the way, have you published a copy book of your poetry? I would love to buy a copy.

  2. Rod E. Kok
    October 23, 2018 at 5:28 pm

    Love it! I can feel a lot of emotion in this one.

    Reply
    • Christine Bolton
      October 23, 2018 at 9:32 pm

      Thank you Rod! Thats what I was hoping for 🙂

      Reply
  3. Shuku
    October 23, 2018 at 4:57 pm

    Ooooh straight to the point, and so true. Neither spectre nor invisible, but sometimes…people are deliberately obtuse, sadly.

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    • Christine Bolton
      October 23, 2018 at 5:01 pm

      Aww thanks Shuku 🙂

      Reply
  4. Sadje
    October 23, 2018 at 4:48 pm

    Very nice. Thanks for sharing

    Reply
    • Christine Bolton
      October 23, 2018 at 9:32 pm

      Thanks, as always, Sadje

      Reply
      • Sadje
        October 24, 2018 at 1:59 am

        My pleasure.

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