My pleaaure. I always struggle with tone and finding balance. I see it comes easy to you.
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Christine Bolton
January 24, 2019 at 4:02 pm
You are too kind! Sometimes I donβt even know where Iβm going with a poem. I keep writing and writing and it goes nowhere. Then I have to put it away and come back to it and then it becomes something else! I guess thatβs looking for balance. Thank you so much for reading π
Hey, I have never written a poem where the last two sentences weren’t written first. I write them completely backwards, so I struggle with balance.
My pleasure
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Christine Bolton
January 24, 2019 at 7:40 pm
Wow! Thatβs amazing! No wonder you struggle π
Thank you for the lovely compliment! π I try…sometimes it comes together how I want it to, sometimes not. I just hope some can relate. Hope you had a nice Christmas and wishing you and your son, plus the pets, a Happy New Year π
Thank you so much π
Such a despairing poem but beautifully written, Christine.
You have the ability to write powerfully, while never losing a trace of beauty.
Not many of us can keep that fine tuned balance.
Oh gosh, thank you so much! I am quite humbled by your comment π It means a lot to me.
My pleaaure. I always struggle with tone and finding balance. I see it comes easy to you.
You are too kind! Sometimes I donβt even know where Iβm going with a poem. I keep writing and writing and it goes nowhere. Then I have to put it away and come back to it and then it becomes something else! I guess thatβs looking for balance. Thank you so much for reading π
Hey, I have never written a poem where the last two sentences weren’t written first. I write them completely backwards, so I struggle with balance.
My pleasure
Wow! Thatβs amazing! No wonder you struggle π
Lol
Powerful poem…esp the lead in to the final 2 stanzas.
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback π
Youβre most welcome!
This is powerful, Christine!π
Thank you dear Punam ππ
My pleasure! ππ
I like how in the black and bleak – the resolve shines a glimmer of hope, powerful
Thanks Paul. Yes, without that, there is nothing. π
A very powerfully worded piece Christine
Thank you so much Ivor πI hope you are doing better and you had a nice Christmas π
Christmas was good, but now I’m very tired. Trying to do some blogging, already running out of puff ππ
Take it easy my friend and don’t overdo it. I want read lots of stuff on your blog ππWarm wishes and a Happy and Healthy New Year to you.
Thank you β€οΈ Christine, and merry New Year to you.
Five words. He is not that powerful.
lovely writing oft means miserable living π
Thank you so much . Yes youβre right, I have been there
As have many others. π’
You are so good at this.
Thank you for the lovely compliment! π I try…sometimes it comes together how I want it to, sometimes not. I just hope some can relate. Hope you had a nice Christmas and wishing you and your son, plus the pets, a Happy New Year π
Thank you
Well done! π
Thank you Kevin! π