Blog, Pain/Sadness The Wall by Christine Bolton • January 5, 2019 • 17 Comments The Wall The ice in your heart will not meltEven in a springtime thawingNor will the wall around you fallUnless you stop withdrawing In-between the bricks and mortarI search for the invisible gapHoping I might find a way inBut I fear that you will entrap You are a pillar of stoneThat will never crackCold, hard, impenetrableAll I want is to have you back Playing your unfair game of three strikes and you’re outPunishing and cruelYou are a brute and a lout Banished from your worldNever more can I enterYou have chosen to beThe ultimate tormentor Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing ©Word Prompts:ThawingThreeWallGap Share this:EmailPrintLike this:Like Loading...
Wow. This is amazing. Felt kind of attacked, but I love it nonetheless. The kind of poetry that stops and makes you reevaluate.
Thanks Sophia! I guess it depends on what side of the wall you are if you are feeling attacked. It could go both ways 🙂💕
Very lovely piece this is 🙂
Thank you so much! I’m happy you liked it 🙂
Great poem! Understand the hurt and yearning in this – been there done that, but I think I’ve come to believe in the saying, “when they show you who they really are – believe them!!!
xoxoxo
Thank you 🙂 I think you are absolutely right Charles!
Enjoyed. Three strikes and you are out is a awful rule for relationships. Thanks for participating today.
Thank you Roger!
Brilliant words!
Thank you so much 🙂 I’m glad you liked it
Ouch.. That hurt. I am teary eyed. And boy do I feel this to my core. Beautiful. 🙂
Yes, there are men like that. Sorry if you had first hand knowledge of someone like that. It hurts 🙁
It does so much so. 😪
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Very well written.
Thank you!
You’re welcome 😇