Vision in Blue – Flash Fiction

Vision in Blue

He couldn’t believe his eyes.  It was the most amazing thing he had ever seen. He was in the middle of a forest and the floor was covered in beautiful flowers. There were deer gamboling through the trees and he could hear music.

Walking slowly towards him was a beautiful girl.  Barefoot and draped in a blue dress, a vision of loveliness. Beautiful flowers were in her hair, a stag at her side and she was playing a wooden flute or whistle. He was mesmerized by the sight and sounds. 

As she came closer he stood motionless in a stupor, hypnotized by the scene.

He said to himself in a whisper, ‘Man, these drugs are good.’

Christine Bolton – Poetry for Healing ©

116 Words

In response to Fandango’s Flash Fiction Photo Challenge

  5 comments for “Vision in Blue – Flash Fiction

  1. February 19, 2019 at 10:40 am

    Ha! Didn’t expect that ending!

    • Christine Bolton
      February 19, 2019 at 11:05 am

      Good I surprised you! 🙂

  2. February 20, 2019 at 12:07 pm

    Ah! Surprise twist.

    • Christine Bolton
      February 20, 2019 at 12:25 pm

      Thanks Punam. I didn’t want to write a fairy tale 🙂

      • February 20, 2019 at 12:28 pm

        You are welcome, Christine. I enjoyed this. 😊💞

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