Poetic Tag “Twas Not, Twas”

Fandango, from This, That and the Other has tagged me in a funny Poetic Tag originated by Rory, A Guy Called Bloke. He started another one of his “Not Just My Verse” poetry blog hops. He wrote the first stanza, then passed it on to Paula of Light Motifs II and she sent it on to Fandango and so on. Below is the poem so far.

It’s “Twas Not Twas!

So here’s how Rory started things off:

I am sure, well pretty sure NO, of course l am sure!
Twas not twas, twas not there before!
And yet, here l am looking upon it with widened eyes …
This thing that twasn’t, and yet now it twas a surprise!

Then Paula followed up with:

When I told my friends what had transpired,
They laughed and said I must be a liar,
For things like THAT surely are not real;
Then it came back and said let’s make a deal.

Then Fandango:

So it wants to make a deal?
Well that does have some appeal.
I asked it, “Whatsit all about?”
And that twas when it started to shout.

Here is my contribution:

Yes, whatsit all about Alfie?
Do you have bats in your belfry?
Was it this or was it that?
I know ‘twasn’t tit for tat

Okay. I’m going to pass the poetic baton to:

Kristian of Tales from the Mind of Kristian

Have fun with it Kristian 🙂

  29 comments for “Poetic Tag “Twas Not, Twas”

  1. June 2, 2019 at 9:32 pm

    Haaa’ I’ve a song for these words…..
    https://youtu.be/bAyxo24qF-E

    • Christine Bolton
      June 2, 2019 at 10:28 pm

      Oh I cannot open it Ivor 😔

      • June 2, 2019 at 10:37 pm

        Oh its a long song by Procol Harum, called “In Held T’was I” (1968)HQ MUNROWS RETRO, Version. If you search Youtube, you should find it….. make sure you get this version….

      • Christine Bolton
        June 2, 2019 at 10:54 pm

        Good fun Ivor! Thanks 🙂

      • June 2, 2019 at 11:09 pm

        I hope you enjoyed the old epic….

    • June 3, 2019 at 1:00 am

      A perfect addition!

      • June 3, 2019 at 1:22 am

        Thank you, its an old fav of mine….

  2. June 2, 2019 at 9:33 pm

    Good addition

    • Christine Bolton
      June 2, 2019 at 10:19 pm

      Silly poetry stuff! 🙂

      • June 2, 2019 at 11:33 pm

        It’s the point, I think.

  3. June 2, 2019 at 10:36 pm

    Cute!

    • Christine Bolton
      June 2, 2019 at 10:53 pm

      Yours too Paula! 😀

  4. June 2, 2019 at 10:51 pm

    Good fun, Christine!

    • Christine Bolton
      June 2, 2019 at 10:53 pm

      Lol…it was funny 🙂

  5. June 3, 2019 at 2:32 am

    Your addition was great. 😂

    • Christine Bolton
      June 3, 2019 at 3:04 pm

      Thanks! I appreciate it 🙂

  6. June 7, 2019 at 3:30 am

    Another fine addition Christine, well done, sorry for being late to say great piece, l don’t know why, but l never even knew it had been responded to. These pingbacks by WP need to be fixed 🙂

    • Christine Bolton
      June 9, 2019 at 7:28 pm

      Thanks so much Rory. Yes Pingbacks just don’t work for me anymore – at all 😔

      • June 9, 2019 at 7:39 pm

        Pleasure Christine 🙂

  7. June 8, 2019 at 7:31 am

    Brilliant. Thanks Christine for tagging me. I’ll get right on that now. 🙂

    • Christine Bolton
      June 8, 2019 at 10:20 am

      No worries I’m sure! 🙂

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