Kim, from Writing in North Norfolk, is hosting Monday Quadrille at D'Verse Poets tonight. She has prompted us with the word Fret which can be a verb or a noun. I chose the verb. A Quadrille is a poem with exactly 44 words excluding the title.
I really like this Christine. We hear a lot about sending out angry words that can’t be rescinded, but with a forgiving attitude, angry words do not have to be a curse, so true… and the gentle rhyming adds to the beautiful softness of the message.
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Christine Bolton
June 23, 2019 at 9:59 pm
Thank you Lona. I really appreciate your kind words. Yes you are right. Angry words are just that. We are only human and sometimes we get it wrong. 😢❤️
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Christine Bolton
June 23, 2019 at 10:01 pm
Than you Lona. I really appreciate your kind words. Yes we use angry words but we are only human and sometimes we get it wrong 😢❤️
Your Quadrille starts off quite Shakespearean, Christine, with ‘Please, love, fret no more’ and I like the gentle shift from tears and anger to the tears eventually drying, a glimmer of hope in a tear drop.
This poem appealed to me. Loved the artwork. I am studying Creative Writing: Structures and Forms this study period as an elective for my degree and poetry will be covered as a topic and assessment option.
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Christine Bolton
June 17, 2019 at 8:39 pm
Thank you! I’m so happy for you and your studies. Enjoy every minute! I love the Quadrille form. It is a useful form for something fun and lighthearted too. 🙂
I really like this Christine. We hear a lot about sending out angry words that can’t be rescinded, but with a forgiving attitude, angry words do not have to be a curse, so true… and the gentle rhyming adds to the beautiful softness of the message.
Thank you Lona. I really appreciate your kind words. Yes you are right. Angry words are just that. We are only human and sometimes we get it wrong. 😢❤️
Than you Lona. I really appreciate your kind words. Yes we use angry words but we are only human and sometimes we get it wrong 😢❤️
Its a wonderful poem Christine, and it is a strong statement on resilience.
Thanks Rob. Yes…not much else we can do in some situations 🙂💕
I think that once the tears have run dry it’s time to start anew.
Your Quadrille starts off quite Shakespearean, Christine, with ‘Please, love, fret no more’ and I like the gentle shift from tears and anger to the tears eventually drying, a glimmer of hope in a tear drop.
Thank so much Kim! 🙂
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Fret not…indeed…such a gentle rhythm to your words!❤️
Thanks so much Punam 🙂💕
My pleasure.
I love the way you have talked about the emotions without actually saying anything about specifics!
Thanks Sadke. In only 44 words there’s not much room left!! 🙂
Still it gets the message across!
I agree this is a comforting, encouraging poem. ☺️
Thank you so much Crystal 🙂💕
wonderful….really iNspirational
Thank you, as always. I appreciate it 🙂
This poem appealed to me. Loved the artwork. I am studying Creative Writing: Structures and Forms this study period as an elective for my degree and poetry will be covered as a topic and assessment option.
Thank you! I’m so happy for you and your studies. Enjoy every minute! I love the Quadrille form. It is a useful form for something fun and lighthearted too. 🙂
I do read your poetry even if I don’t comment it. I checked out your resources page for some inspiration. Many thanks.
Oh my pleasure! 🙂💕
I like the rhyming pattern in this piece. Nicely written quadrille.
Thanks so much! 🙂💕