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Quick Fix

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Quick Fix

Stroking and exciting
Your silken touch
causing skin to react
Bodies responding
Adoration mutual
and willingly attract  
 
In semi darkness
Writhing as one
in nostalgic fantasy
Temperatures rising
Perspiration dripping
Heights of ecstasy
 
When completely spent
overjoyed in euphoria
Comes sleepy contentment
Adoration is mutual
until the return
of perpetual resentment

 
Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing ©

Lillian is hosting D'Verse Poets and has
prompted us with the word Temperature

Word Prompts
Adoration - WotD
Nostalgia - RDP
Overjoyed - FOWC

  14 comments for “Quick Fix”

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  2. robtkistner
    July 31, 2019 at 1:30 pm

    This is excellent Christine. Perhaps the reason young love is so beautiful rests with the fact that not enough time has elapsed to build that resentment.

    • Christine Bolton
      July 31, 2019 at 3:09 pm

      Yes how right you are Rob 🙂💕👍

  3. Sadje
    July 31, 2019 at 11:46 am

    Brilliant!

    • Christine Bolton
      July 31, 2019 at 12:06 pm

      Thank you my friend! 🙂💕

      • Sadje
        July 31, 2019 at 1:56 pm

        You’re welcome Christine

  4. Frank Hubeny
    July 31, 2019 at 11:19 am

    I like the parallel of contentment and resentment at the end.

    • Christine Bolton
      July 31, 2019 at 11:41 am

      Thanks Frank …i t came together right there 🙂

  5. Paul Cannon
    July 31, 2019 at 10:22 am

    You had me at writhing, such gravitas writhing, loved the heat.

    • Christine Bolton
      July 31, 2019 at 12:03 pm

      🙂 Thanks Paul.

  6. Ron.
    July 31, 2019 at 9:35 am

    Gotta agree: Those last 3 lines are the cold shower. And they WHAM-BAM end the piece so perfectly! Salute!

    • Christine Bolton
      July 31, 2019 at 12:04 pm

      Thans Ron! 🙂 Life can be just like that 😏

  7. lillian
    July 31, 2019 at 9:29 am

    Oh my…..I was riding with you in the poem …. thinking Whew! I will need a cold shower at the end of this…..and then your words provided it! “Perpetual resentment” like a cold washcloth slapped on the face at the end of this passionate scene.
    Well done!

    • Christine Bolton
      July 31, 2019 at 12:05 pm

      Thanks so much Lillian 🙂 Temperature seems cover so many things 🤣

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