
After the Love Has Gone
After the love has gone
and the hierarchy shifts
There is always a winner
and of course, a loser
and the taking back of gifts
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Who will be my advocate
in this frazzled, ugly mess
Serenity long gone
just hurt and anger remain
and you couldnโt care less
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Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing ยฉ
Word Prompts
Hierarchy - WotD
Serene - RDP
Advocate - FOWC
I loved your poem today Christine.
Aww thanks Jim. I was inspired by the song. I missed song lyric Sunday yesterday ๐ Sorry. Iโll be back next week ๐
So true ๐๐ค
Thanks Andy. I knew youโd understand. Loved that black heart! Iโll have to use it occasionally ๐๐
The black heart is becoming a signature for me these days , i just like it . I understand so very much . ๐ค
Yes, I can tell ๐๐ค I like that heart too! Thanks for sharing
A lovely poem.
Thank you sweet Sadje ๐๐
Youโre welcome Christine. ๐
Fabulous use of the prompts, especially “hierarchy”–wow!
Thanks Fleur!๐
Always welcome ๐
and the hierarchy shifts – i never thought of it like this – something to ponder upon today – beautiful as always Christine
Yes…there is always one who feels more powerful as a relationship/marriage ends. ๐ข
How the power shifts! This is wonderful, Christine. ๐๐
Thank you my dear. ๐ขโค๏ธ
You are welcome!
The taking back of gifts really spoke to me in this poem, Christine it recalled the final days of my marriage. Really well written.
Thank you, it seems to be a common heartache. Iโm sorry you went through that too. ๐ฅ
I know God it was painful but we survive don’t we?
Yes, you think you’ll never get through it, but we do. We are invincible … well not right away! Glad you’re OK ๐
<3 Thanks Christine. It is the deepest pain as I know you know.
It certainly is. Thanks goodness we have our writing to keep us sane โค๏ธ