Sky Above Ivory Absent of sun A thin cover of clouds Covering the expanse of space A pristine and stark appearance looms long No cushy formation of cumulus to see A bleak, pale canopy reminiscent Of saintly alabaster shrouds In a mausoleum Depressingly Saddening Yearning Sun
WOW, I cannot even do my usual “fave pick”, as every line glows despite the cloud cover. That form is very interesting, so thanks for sharing…when I have a spare hour, I may try it! Blessings to you, dear girl (‘girl’ is meant affectionately, not dismissively, hope you know) <3
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Christine Bolton
November 3, 2019 at 12:22 am
Well thank you sweet girl! That is an expression I use all the time 😊 so no offense taken here. The form was quite easy really, you might enjoy it. Have a great Sunday💕
Bless your heart!! You never know, these days–feminists can get prickly over the term “girl”, but if you’re from the South, or African American, it connotes “familiarity/friendship”. I’m ready for a Sunday…although I kind of think of my whole weekend as Sunday: I do online church Saturday afternoons because I like Gateway Church in TX (I’m in WA), and they have 5 optional services–such a luxury! 🙂 <3 Have a blessed week!
WOW, I cannot even do my usual “fave pick”, as every line glows despite the cloud cover. That form is very interesting, so thanks for sharing…when I have a spare hour, I may try it! Blessings to you, dear girl (‘girl’ is meant affectionately, not dismissively, hope you know) <3
Well thank you sweet girl! That is an expression I use all the time 😊 so no offense taken here. The form was quite easy really, you might enjoy it. Have a great Sunday💕
Bless your heart!! You never know, these days–feminists can get prickly over the term “girl”, but if you’re from the South, or African American, it connotes “familiarity/friendship”. I’m ready for a Sunday…although I kind of think of my whole weekend as Sunday: I do online church Saturday afternoons because I like Gateway Church in TX (I’m in WA), and they have 5 optional services–such a luxury! 🙂 <3 Have a blessed week!
You too my friend 🙂💕❤️
Thanks!! 🙂 <3
Thank you Christine, that’s an interesting format, and you did it beautifully…
Thank you my dear Ivor. It was quite easy really. I’ll have to try it again 🙂❤️
Oh Christine, you’re a Wizz’…..I have trouble doing a Haiku, and did my 1st Tanka just the other day… xx
Just remember, it’s the words that count ! It’s not always the syllables 🤣 🙂❤️
Oooh! That sounds cold! Beautifully expressed. ❤️🙂
Thanks so much Punam ❤️🙂
My pleasure, dear. 🙂❤️
Wonderfully written, but now I feel like I need to wrap myself in a blanket.
Thank you so much! Yes you snuggle up and keep warm 🥶❤️
It’s all about layers and making new blankets. LOL! 🥰
I get sweaty just think of thick clothes! Poor you 😧
LOL! You wouldn’t being thinking sweaty if it were 30 degrees outside. 🥶
Probably not! 🤣