“that grubby sack” is such a great phrase. I’m guessing that is baggage or envy here? If it was about a guy it would mean something else. The metaphor is excellent, Christine.
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Christine Bolton
December 4, 2019 at 9:55 pm
Thanks Lisa! Yes, it is about a woman. I’m glad you liked it 🙂
Christine, you have captured the envy and sheer jealousy of the woman in the B&W photo. I don’t need color to know to watch my back around her. – Well done
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Christine Bolton
December 4, 2019 at 9:53 pm
Thanks so much Darnell. After I wrote the poem I found the picture and I thought she looked the part too! 🙂
Well done, Christine! The image is perfect, as well.
Thank you! Much appreciated 🙂💕
You’re welcome! 😊
I love the last stanza. Proud self assurance and Boldly confident.
Thanks Gina. Yes, she knew who she was dealing with 🙂
“that grubby sack” is such a great phrase. I’m guessing that is baggage or envy here? If it was about a guy it would mean something else. The metaphor is excellent, Christine.
Thanks Lisa! Yes, it is about a woman. I’m glad you liked it 🙂
You are welcome.
Just desserts!
Yes, we had her number! 🙂👍
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Christine, you have captured the envy and sheer jealousy of the woman in the B&W photo. I don’t need color to know to watch my back around her. – Well done
Thanks so much Darnell. After I wrote the poem I found the picture and I thought she looked the part too! 🙂