The pain and grief of relationships or their ending(s), and how people are oblivious to their inner self, the shadow in particular. Great lines Christine, heartfelt.
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Christine Bolton
December 13, 2019 at 11:19 am
Thank you Paul! It means a lot 🙂 Yes, I was describing someone who was oblivious to who he was, and what he had become. Sad really.
i love the structure of your poem , the 5 lines with alternating rhymes and the pause in the middle. this is truly a feast for the tongue, wicked good!
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Christine Bolton
December 13, 2019 at 8:14 am
Oh thank you Gina1 I wasn’t t so sure on this one. Out of my comfort zone maybe ☺️
i understand how scary that can be, bu if we never challenge ourselves and be a little different we’ll never see how amazing it can be, in this case you aced it wonderfully.
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Christine Bolton
December 13, 2019 at 9:27 am
You are too kind! You are correct though, we have to push ourselves. I guess we’ll see how many people actually like it 😳
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scotthastiepoet
December 13, 2019 at 5:16 am
Quite a tale Christine and one that has powerful echoes for many of us, I’m sure. Well crafted too…
I think we see it all too much in black… here is a song for this poem
Well that is my most favorite Stones song of all time 😊👍 Thanks for reading Björn!
Negative thoughts can be depressing and even “kill” us. Too bad on the relationship but may be a blessing in the long run.
Thanks Grace. Yes it was about someone I knew s long time ago.
Nice description of that collection being as “blunt as rusty knives”.
Haha! Yes, thank you Frank 🙂
The pain and grief of relationships or their ending(s), and how people are oblivious to their inner self, the shadow in particular. Great lines Christine, heartfelt.
Thank you Paul! It means a lot 🙂 Yes, I was describing someone who was oblivious to who he was, and what he had become. Sad really.
i love the structure of your poem , the 5 lines with alternating rhymes and the pause in the middle. this is truly a feast for the tongue, wicked good!
Oh thank you Gina1 I wasn’t t so sure on this one. Out of my comfort zone maybe ☺️
i understand how scary that can be, bu if we never challenge ourselves and be a little different we’ll never see how amazing it can be, in this case you aced it wonderfully.
You are too kind! You are correct though, we have to push ourselves. I guess we’ll see how many people actually like it 😳
Quite a tale Christine and one that has powerful echoes for many of us, I’m sure. Well crafted too…
Thanks so much Scott. 🙂
Great poetry.
Thanks so much 🙂💕
You’re welcome 😉