12 comments for “Daily Haiku – Wed. January 1, 2020

  1. January 1, 2020 at 8:02 am

    Happy stories ahead.

    • Christine Bolton
      January 1, 2020 at 8:37 am

      Yes! Thank you ☺️

      • January 1, 2020 at 8:54 am

        💖

  2. January 1, 2020 at 8:15 am

    Hi. Happy New Year. Great senryu.I always get lost on the margins twixt senyru and haiku. I know what each is but there is a constant flow of boundaries. Have a great day. I have shared. Here’s the link https://goffjamesart.wordpress.com/2020/01/01/senryu-a-poem-by-christine-bolton/ . Goff

    • Christine Bolton
      January 1, 2020 at 8:37 am

      Thanks Goff! Yes there was a fine line and this was was sitting on it! I don’t think it should bother anyone, it’s all about the thought you are conveying 🙂💕👍 Thanks for the share and Happy New Year to you.

      • January 1, 2020 at 9:35 am

        Hi. Christine. In reality there are no borders. One just knows where it fits. Sometimes I have problems with the 5-7-5 haiku format. I am comforted, through my reading and research, that one can on occasion vary the syllable count for the benefit of the flow and meaning of a piece – the asymmetric haiku. Have a great day. Goff

      • Christine Bolton
        January 1, 2020 at 9:58 am

        Yes, I think you’re right Goff. Reading books of Haiku I see that many do not conform to the 5-7-5 format. I think the structure is there as a guideline perhaps and it’s ok to color outside of the lines from time to time! I hope you have a good day too. A new year and new possibilities 🙂💕

      • January 1, 2020 at 10:11 am

        Thanks. Happy Day.

  3. January 1, 2020 at 8:44 am

    Happy New Year Christine!

    • Christine Bolton
      January 1, 2020 at 9:08 am

      Thanks Lisa! Happy New Year to you too 🙂💕

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