Acid Trip – A Couplet

Acid Trip

The sky cries its tears of acid rain
and the earth screams out in constant pain


Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing ©

Frank is hosting D'Verse Poets tonight
and has prompted us with a Couplet.

  27 comments for “Acid Trip – A Couplet

  1. March 26, 2020 at 7:21 pm

    two very powerful lines, a description of our challenging times, earth is sending a message, are we listening and doing something?

    • Christine Bolton
      March 26, 2020 at 10:13 pm

      Sadly only some listen 😢

  2. March 26, 2020 at 7:59 pm

    kaykuala

    The sky cries its tears of acid rain
    and the earth screams out in constant pain

    How cruel can it be. It rightfully reflects the current problems the world is facing. Well thought out Christine!

    Hank

    • Christine Bolton
      March 26, 2020 at 10:17 pm

      Thank you so much Hank 🙂

  3. Beverly Crawford
    March 26, 2020 at 8:33 pm

    WOW. A powerful couplet.

    • Christine Bolton
      March 26, 2020 at 10:18 pm

      Thanks Beverly ☺️

  4. March 26, 2020 at 8:45 pm

    A poignant piece Christine….. maybe this song…..
    https://youtu.be/7SJ-8Vle_Eo

    • Christine Bolton
      March 26, 2020 at 10:20 pm

      Thank you dear Ivor 🙂

  5. March 26, 2020 at 8:50 pm

    Short but. very nice

    • Christine Bolton
      March 26, 2020 at 10:21 pm

      Yes, a couplet! 🙂 Thanks

  6. March 26, 2020 at 9:15 pm

    A great couplet!

    • Christine Bolton
      March 26, 2020 at 10:22 pm

      Thanks Dwight 🙂

  7. March 26, 2020 at 10:38 pm

    I imagine there must be some pain for the earth coming from that kind of rain.

    • Christine Bolton
      March 26, 2020 at 11:22 pm

      Pain for all of us Frank. I liked your prompt today 🙂

  8. March 27, 2020 at 1:34 am

    Why do we harm our mother so? 🙁

    • Christine Bolton
      March 27, 2020 at 7:34 am

      Selfishness, greed, indifference etc. etc 😢

  9. March 27, 2020 at 8:24 am

    Very powerful couplet. Thank you. I was wondering what this would be when I read the title. 😀

    • Christine Bolton
      March 27, 2020 at 5:40 pm

      Haha, yes! Thanks Merril ☺️

  10. March 27, 2020 at 11:44 am

    This is so we’ll written. A bit scary

    • Christine Bolton
      March 27, 2020 at 5:42 pm

      Sadly it’s true 😢

  11. March 27, 2020 at 11:03 pm

    This packs a punch in 2 little lines!

    • Christine Bolton
      March 28, 2020 at 11:13 pm

      I was hoping it would 🙂💕

  12. March 28, 2020 at 7:19 am

    This cuts to the quick. (K)

    • Christine Bolton
      March 28, 2020 at 11:11 pm

      Yes, I’m afraid so 😢

  13. March 29, 2020 at 10:35 am

    Thankfully the acid rain is less so these days… there are things that have improved

    • Christine Bolton
      March 29, 2020 at 3:41 pm

      A small blessing ☺️

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