Acid Trip
The sky cries its tears of acid rain
and the earth screams out in constant pain
Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing ©
Frank is hosting D'Verse Poets tonight
and has prompted us with a Couplet.
Acid Trip – A Couplet
Finding Your Words
The sky cries its tears of acid rain
and the earth screams out in constant pain
Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing ©
Frank is hosting D'Verse Poets tonight
and has prompted us with a Couplet.
Thankfully the acid rain is less so these days… there are things that have improved
A small blessing ☺️
This cuts to the quick. (K)
Yes, I’m afraid so 😢
This packs a punch in 2 little lines!
I was hoping it would 🙂💕
This is so we’ll written. A bit scary
Sadly it’s true 😢
Very powerful couplet. Thank you. I was wondering what this would be when I read the title. 😀
Haha, yes! Thanks Merril ☺️
😀
Why do we harm our mother so? 🙁
Selfishness, greed, indifference etc. etc 😢
I imagine there must be some pain for the earth coming from that kind of rain.
Pain for all of us Frank. I liked your prompt today 🙂
A great couplet!
Thanks Dwight 🙂
Short but. very nice
Yes, a couplet! 🙂 Thanks
A poignant piece Christine….. maybe this song…..
https://youtu.be/7SJ-8Vle_Eo
Thank you dear Ivor 🙂
WOW. A powerful couplet.
Thanks Beverly ☺️
kaykuala
The sky cries its tears of acid rain
and the earth screams out in constant pain
How cruel can it be. It rightfully reflects the current problems the world is facing. Well thought out Christine!
Hank
Thank you so much Hank 🙂
two very powerful lines, a description of our challenging times, earth is sending a message, are we listening and doing something?
Sadly only some listen 😢