27 comments for “Acid Trip – A Couplet”

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    March 29, 2020 at 10:35 am

    Thankfully the acid rain is less so these days… there are things that have improved

    • Christine Bolton
      March 29, 2020 at 3:41 pm

      A small blessing ☺️

  2. memadtwo
    March 28, 2020 at 7:19 am

    This cuts to the quick. (K)

    • Christine Bolton
      March 28, 2020 at 11:11 pm

      Yes, I’m afraid so 😢

  3. revivedwriter
    March 27, 2020 at 11:03 pm

    This packs a punch in 2 little lines!

    • Christine Bolton
      March 28, 2020 at 11:13 pm

      I was hoping it would 🙂💕

  4. judeitakali
    March 27, 2020 at 11:44 am

    This is so we’ll written. A bit scary

    • Christine Bolton
      March 27, 2020 at 5:42 pm

      Sadly it’s true 😢

  5. merrildsmith
    March 27, 2020 at 8:24 am

    Very powerful couplet. Thank you. I was wondering what this would be when I read the title. 😀

    • Christine Bolton
      March 27, 2020 at 5:40 pm

      Haha, yes! Thanks Merril ☺️

  6. msjadeli
    March 27, 2020 at 1:34 am

    Why do we harm our mother so? 🙁

    • Christine Bolton
      March 27, 2020 at 7:34 am

      Selfishness, greed, indifference etc. etc 😢

  7. Frank Hubeny
    March 26, 2020 at 10:38 pm

    I imagine there must be some pain for the earth coming from that kind of rain.

    • Christine Bolton
      March 26, 2020 at 11:22 pm

      Pain for all of us Frank. I liked your prompt today 🙂

  8. rothpoetry
    March 26, 2020 at 9:15 pm

    A great couplet!

    • Christine Bolton
      March 26, 2020 at 10:22 pm

      Thanks Dwight 🙂

  9. J. S.
    March 26, 2020 at 8:50 pm

    Short but. very nice

    • Christine Bolton
      March 26, 2020 at 10:21 pm

      Yes, a couplet! 🙂 Thanks

  10. ivor20
    March 26, 2020 at 8:45 pm

    A poignant piece Christine….. maybe this song…..
    https://youtu.be/7SJ-8Vle_Eo

    • Christine Bolton
      March 26, 2020 at 10:20 pm

      Thank you dear Ivor 🙂

  11. Beverly Crawford
    March 26, 2020 at 8:33 pm

    WOW. A powerful couplet.

    • Christine Bolton
      March 26, 2020 at 10:18 pm

      Thanks Beverly ☺️

  12. hank77
    March 26, 2020 at 7:59 pm

    kaykuala

    The sky cries its tears of acid rain
    and the earth screams out in constant pain

    How cruel can it be. It rightfully reflects the current problems the world is facing. Well thought out Christine!

    Hank

    • Christine Bolton
      March 26, 2020 at 10:17 pm

      Thank you so much Hank 🙂

  13. Gina
    March 26, 2020 at 7:21 pm

    two very powerful lines, a description of our challenging times, earth is sending a message, are we listening and doing something?

    • Christine Bolton
      March 26, 2020 at 10:13 pm

      Sadly only some listen 😢

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