Sadness – Poem of the Month – September 2020

Sadness

Another day
bleeds into night
as feelings
of despondency 
once more hang
in morbidity
Excitement 
a faded memory
of feelings
long forgotten
Eyes well with tears
as the heart struggles
to find it’s rhythm
Love’s death
a cross too heavy
to bear
and once more
the darkness comes


Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing ©

Word Prompts

Excitement - Word of the Day
Eyes - RDP

  20 comments for “Sadness – Poem of the Month – September 2020

  1. July 4, 2020 at 11:19 am

    Bittersweet, but prefect.

    • Christine Bolton
      July 4, 2020 at 12:10 pm

      Thanks Felicia 🥰

  2. July 4, 2020 at 11:51 am

    So heartbreaking.

    • Christine Bolton
      July 4, 2020 at 12:10 pm

      Thanks Sadje. It is a bit 😢

      • July 4, 2020 at 2:43 pm

        You’re welcome 😉

  3. July 4, 2020 at 11:52 am

    Just wonderful. Love the amazing word flow. The first line is so much like that of ‘ Someone you loved’ by Lewis Capaldi. Heart wrenching but such honesty. Love it. Interesting blues. Peace and greetings from Sui generis 💛💛

    • Christine Bolton
      July 4, 2020 at 12:08 pm

      Thank you so much! Yes!! I just heard that song the other day for the first time and wrote down the first line because it struck a chord. I changed it a little and the rest came through. It’s funny how a few words can inspire us to write. 🥰. Thank you again ☺️

      • July 4, 2020 at 12:12 pm

        My pleasure dearest poet. Some songs just fill you up with deep emotion. Poetry and music go hand hand in hand. I agree when you say that even a few words inspire us to write…. Please keep writing. Peace ✌️

      • Christine Bolton
        July 4, 2020 at 3:08 pm

        Thank you for your kind words ☺️💕

      • July 5, 2020 at 11:09 am

        You are always welcome. Take care.

  4. July 4, 2020 at 2:38 pm

    Christine, I love this! You have expressed sadness beautifully. ❤️

    • Christine Bolton
      July 4, 2020 at 3:07 pm

      Thank you so much my dear Punam 🥰💕

  5. July 6, 2020 at 1:43 am

    Much darkness in this one Christine.

  6. July 18, 2020 at 3:40 pm

    Wow Christine!!! I LOVE THIS!! So moving, heartfelt and bittersweet!! You so captured the feelings!! Loved these brilliant lines – “Another day
    bleeds into night” stunning!!! And – “Love’s death
    a cross too heavy
    to bear
    and once more
    the darkness comes”
    A real Masterpiece, My Dear!!! Bellissimo, Christine Bellissimo!!

    • Christine Bolton
      July 18, 2020 at 11:18 pm

      Awww…too kind as always Chuck 🥰 Thank you my friend 💕

  7. July 22, 2020 at 3:35 pm

    Great piece👏🏼👏🏼❤

  8. Christine Bolton
    July 22, 2020 at 9:02 pm

    Thank you so much ☺️

  9. Sinaloma
    October 7, 2020 at 1:30 pm

    thank u so much..

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