Well hello 😀 it’s getting hot in here!! Phew! ❤️ Love this especially; “The slow, delicious descent from the euphoric state is a journey of gratification.” Yes, yes! Thank you so much for writing to the prompt.
Someone lower the AC here, stat! Sanaa is right, it really just got hot here. Whew!
Beautifully written with so much fervor. You describe the journey into intimacy delicately, and it’s just stunning. Incredible work, as always. This one is mind-blowing with the descriptions and figurative language.
Oh you’re so kind Lucy. Thank you! I had written a shorter version of this before but switched it a little and expanded it for tonight’s prompt. I’m happy it worked ☺️
Oh, Please Christine – find out what it was that “came over you” and let it happen again so we will have – MORE – to read (and maybe listen too?)
xoxo
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Wow! Chistine!! This left me speechless, breathless and melted!! I’m racing to get ice water to splash on my face on my journey to the A/C controls!!! My, oh My!!! Lucky, this didn’t vaporize me! I think Rob should check his hot meter?? I’m sure you broke it when it went past 10!! Love it, love it!! So sensuous and erotic (Mission Accomplished)!
Loved the thoughts in these lines ” Where all reason is lost . . . . Caution to the winds, Screaming out helplessly” The last stanza was amazing too!! Bellissimo, My Dear, Bellissimo!!! There is only one thing you have left to do to make this “Beyond Perfect”, Christine! You need to recite this on an audio and add it so that all your followers can enjoy it with eyes closed and visualize the masterpiece you have made for us!! Please, Please – don’t make me beg more than this!!!
Your followers voted unanimously to have you recite it!! One of your very best!! Mmmm!!!
xoxo – 😍💖💕😘😁🌹🌹
I’m glad I didn’t vaporize too, but I think it was a close call! Yeah, you would have lost a follower! Ha! 😢😢
I do believe you broke poor Rob’s hot meter though! LOL! 😍
Do you mean you are not sure you can because of your plan on WP or you “feel” unable to do it? You are the author. You gave birth to the words. Should you present it in the best possible way to the World – using your own voice???
Did you forget about your followers – unanimous vote to have you recite it??? LOL!
xoxo
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Well hello 😀 it’s getting hot in here!! Phew! ❤️ Love this especially; “The slow, delicious descent from the euphoric state is a journey of gratification.” Yes, yes! Thank you so much for writing to the prompt.
Thanks so much Sanaa! It was a fun hot prompt! ☺️❤️
You’re most welcome! 🥰
This was fabulous and delicious.
Thank you Dale! ☺️ I appreciate it.
🙂
I enjoyed how reality sets in with the last couple of lines. Well-done!
Thanks so much Lisa! ☺️💕
🙂 <3
Oh this is hot!
A bit steamy 😅 Lol
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Very nicely done~ I love image of crumpled and spent! Well done.
Thank you so much Dwight. 🙂
Someone lower the AC here, stat! Sanaa is right, it really just got hot here. Whew!
Beautifully written with so much fervor. You describe the journey into intimacy delicately, and it’s just stunning. Incredible work, as always. This one is mind-blowing with the descriptions and figurative language.
Oh you’re so kind Lucy. Thank you! I had written a shorter version of this before but switched it a little and expanded it for tonight’s prompt. I’m happy it worked ☺️
You nailed it with this one! A poetic journey through a steamy love affair!
You’re most kind. Thank you Ingrid. This wasn’t my usual genre, so it’s nice to be pushed a little ☺️
You definitely turned up the temperature with this poem, Christine! I think it’s all those active verbs – and the passion!
Thanks Kim. It was a it steamy wasn’t it? Lol 🤣
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Wow #Spicy!
I know. I don’t know what came over me! Lol 🤣
Obviously something did 🤣
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Oh, Please Christine – find out what it was that “came over you” and let it happen again so we will have – MORE – to read (and maybe listen too?)
xoxo
😁💕🌹😍
LOL! Too funny Chuck! I’ll see what I can do 🙂
I really hope you can find out what it was and let it nudge you again!! Mmm!
xoxo
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Agree… it’s getting very warm here… so much heat in this poem
Thanks Björn!
Wow Christine, wonderful ascent, suspense, and descent through the fired arc of love making. 4 stars on the hot meter.
Thanks Rob! If I’d gone for 5 stars it would have been censored! Lol 🤣
Wow! Chistine!! This left me speechless, breathless and melted!! I’m racing to get ice water to splash on my face on my journey to the A/C controls!!! My, oh My!!! Lucky, this didn’t vaporize me! I think Rob should check his hot meter?? I’m sure you broke it when it went past 10!! Love it, love it!! So sensuous and erotic (Mission Accomplished)!
Loved the thoughts in these lines ” Where all reason is lost . . . . Caution to the winds, Screaming out helplessly” The last stanza was amazing too!! Bellissimo, My Dear, Bellissimo!!! There is only one thing you have left to do to make this “Beyond Perfect”, Christine! You need to recite this on an audio and add it so that all your followers can enjoy it with eyes closed and visualize the masterpiece you have made for us!! Please, Please – don’t make me beg more than this!!!
Your followers voted unanimously to have you recite it!! One of your very best!! Mmmm!!!
xoxo – 😍💖💕😘😁🌹🌹
Dear Chuck, you are too kind. I’m happy you didn’t vaporize! ☺️💕 I don’t think I could recite it though 😳😳😳🤣
I’m glad I didn’t vaporize too, but I think it was a close call! Yeah, you would have lost a follower! Ha! 😢😢
I do believe you broke poor Rob’s hot meter though! LOL! 😍
Do you mean you are not sure you can because of your plan on WP or you “feel” unable to do it? You are the author. You gave birth to the words. Should you present it in the best possible way to the World – using your own voice???
Did you forget about your followers – unanimous vote to have you recite it??? LOL!
xoxo
😁💕🌹😍
I’m considering it. Maybe another poem? 🙂☺️🤭
Well???? Just as long as you come back to record it later!!!
xoxo
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At 86 it’s a long time since I’ve gloriously splendored …. but it was fun to read about it! Sensuously penned.
“Gloriously splendored” I love that expression! Thanks so much Bev ☺️💕
Your poem is really stunning <3
Thank you so much Jenna! ☺️
Very fiery and passionate! Great response to the prompt. 🙏
Thanks! I’m happy you liked it ☺️
The slow delicious descent … sigh, I love the changes of pace so organic.
Thank you Paul ☺️
Steamily (and well) done.
Thanks Ken ☺️
Very good visualization! Like others are saying here, hot and steamy!
I’m brand new to the scene and boy am I grateful to have come upon this. snap snap snap!!! I loved it.
Thanks