“Sun slipping lower in the sky” is a good followup to the opening line. I picture the lower sun casting longer misshapen shadows. I wanted to include that in my nonet, but I couldn’t figure out how to do so. But here, you’ve done that just by hinting at it. 🙂
I really liked the ending of this.
Summer lets go
for Autumn
to be
here
Thanks Ali ☺️
I find the loss of daylight so demanding… especially since I know how dark it will be in December.
Agreed. Everything seems to take longer.
A lovely poem, Christine.
Thanks so much Helen. I appreciate it ☺️
Summer fun was too short this year. Summer is passing the torch to Autumn’s beauty. Nice work Christine.
Yes it was like we were robbed this year of our fun, but at least we stayed healthy ☺️
That’s the best thing.😊
🙂👍
“Sun slipping lower in the sky” is a good followup to the opening line. I picture the lower sun casting longer misshapen shadows. I wanted to include that in my nonet, but I couldn’t figure out how to do so. But here, you’ve done that just by hinting at it. 🙂
Thank you Ken. I just read yours and it was stunning! You needn’t have worried about the sun lowering in the sky. It was perfect ☺️
Thank you. 🙂
“Shorter days, longer nights” – fits the shape of the Nonet too.
Thank you. I enjoyed the prompts very much ☺️
The fall equinox arrives next week on the 22nd. Summer has until then to shine her light.
Yes, I wish she didn’t have to go so soon 😕 Thanks for reading Truedessa ☺️💕
Thanks Truedessa for reminding me that it is an equinox, not a solstice, this time. I always get them turned around 😕 💕
Beautiful poem Christine
Thank you my friend 😌💕
Always a pleasure
Complements the photograph so beautifully, A lovely farewell to summer.
Thank you Dora! ☺️
Wow! Amazing writing. <3 <3
Aww, thank you dear Lucy 🥰