I so love this one Christine. I love how the construct builds and leaves room for more and more.
At the start such an evocative scene
“Hummingbirds hovered
by bougainvillea
tumbling over
whitewashed walls”
Then memories of a distant past flooded in.
“Desires sated
as light rain
showered
surprised
entwined bodies”
Thanks for joining in and making my morning tingle <3
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Christine Bolton
September 17, 2020 at 8:12 pm
You are so kind Bushbo and I hank you for your kind words. I’m so happy I made you tingle!!! ☺️
I like this Christine – “both knowing more of what was still to come” Altogether delicious… Evoking the best of such passion and its promise.. so well. Makes oneself realise how lucky you’ve been to know what you are talking about… Thanks for prompting some real good memories tonight!
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Christine Bolton
September 17, 2020 at 8:08 pm
Thank you Scott, I am so happy it resonated with you. I went to the memory bank today for inspiration ☺️ I really appreciate your words tonight.
The passion and togetherness that comes full circle in the end… That’s depicted brilliantly, as well beautifully. No one knows what life shall become, but facing it together is all the difference in times of bliss or hardship. Another beautiful poem, Christine. I really enjoyed reading this one.
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Christine Bolton
September 17, 2020 at 8:00 pm
Thank you so much Lucy. That makes me so happy! I really appreciate your kind words ☺️💕
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sanaarizvi
September 17, 2020 at 5:13 pm
I especially love the image of the hummingbirds hovering by bougainvillea. I felt every word 💝
Beach romances are the best <3
Thanks Lisa ☺️
Oh, wow… I can feel this one!
She must have been wearing one of the perfumes you wrote about 🙂
oh probably…. I try to only write about the REALLY seductive ones…. Kidding!
Lol 🤣
Now that was steamy!
It was a bit, wasn’t it? ☺️
Beautifully sensual 🤩
Thank you Jude. I always appreciate your feedback 🥰
H.O.T., CB. Nothing wasted in the telling, but the telling so finely told. Salute!
Oh thanks Ron! It was a bit hot wasn’t it? ☺️
Desires left unfulfilled! Beautiful poem Christine
Thank you ☺️
You’re welcome 😉
Interesting how the light rain shower was just enough to bring the boiling pot to a steady simmer 🙂 ~Jason
Yes! Thanks Jason ☺️
I so love this one Christine. I love how the construct builds and leaves room for more and more.
At the start such an evocative scene
“Hummingbirds hovered
by bougainvillea
tumbling over
whitewashed walls”
Then memories of a distant past flooded in.
“Desires sated
as light rain
showered
surprised
entwined bodies”
Thanks for joining in and making my morning tingle <3
You are so kind Bushbo and I hank you for your kind words. I’m so happy I made you tingle!!! ☺️
🙂
I like this Christine – “both knowing more of what was still to come” Altogether delicious… Evoking the best of such passion and its promise.. so well. Makes oneself realise how lucky you’ve been to know what you are talking about… Thanks for prompting some real good memories tonight!
Thank you Scott, I am so happy it resonated with you. I went to the memory bank today for inspiration ☺️ I really appreciate your words tonight.
The passion and togetherness that comes full circle in the end… That’s depicted brilliantly, as well beautifully. No one knows what life shall become, but facing it together is all the difference in times of bliss or hardship. Another beautiful poem, Christine. I really enjoyed reading this one.
Thank you so much Lucy. That makes me so happy! I really appreciate your kind words ☺️💕
I especially love the image of the hummingbirds hovering by bougainvillea. I felt every word 💝
Thank you Sanaa 🥰
What a sense of loss in the end… I read a brief encounter that was doomed to end after the brief tryst that you had.
No, not at all. They had connected and they both knew there was “more of what was still to come” ☺️💕
And the way I interpreted it as well …. yummy poetry.
Thanks Helen 🙂