Daily Haiku – Sun. September 27, 2020

by  •  
Senryu

The wind takes our thoughts
as tears become a river
Pain stays forever
 

Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing ©

  6 comments for “Daily Haiku – Sun. September 27, 2020”

  1. Jay-lyn Doerksen
    September 27, 2020 at 10:28 am

    There is a subtle undertone of bitter sadness. Which I realize seems contradictory but it comes across to me as such. I have neve felt like this before. You have evoked a new emotion. Thank you. 🙂

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    • Christine Bolton
      September 27, 2020 at 12:35 pm

      Thanks so much Jay-lyn. There is a lit if truth in “cry me a river”. Some things are just very painful
      🥰😢

      Reply
  2. judeitakali
    September 28, 2020 at 7:44 am

    Dark and handsomely written haiku🧡

    Reply
    • Christine Bolton
      September 28, 2020 at 10:03 pm

      Thanks Jude! I really appreciate it ☺️💕

      Reply
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