Oh my….this “twisted” for me. I thought it was going to be about positive passion….and then you end it
“Your magnetic force
is like rubbing against
sharp edges
of bad feelings
Revelations come
rushing in
I have had enough”
Like rubbing against sharp edges is the most visceral and damning for the relationship. Very glad to see the affirmative final line.
These are great lines, Christine! I really enjoyed the tempo and force of it. 🙂
Thanks so much Susi 🥰
You are very welcome, Christine! 🙂
rubbing against sharp edges of feelings — love it, so evocative. 🙂
Thanks so much 💕☺️
From such abrasive magnetism only distancing helps.
Yes, change partners perhaps ☺️
Oh my….this “twisted” for me. I thought it was going to be about positive passion….and then you end it
“Your magnetic force
is like rubbing against
sharp edges
of bad feelings
Revelations come
rushing in
I have had enough”
Like rubbing against sharp edges is the most visceral and damning for the relationship. Very glad to see the affirmative final line.
Thank you Lillian. It’s the expression, “It takes two to tango” that infers there is something up ☺️
Wow! A really wonderful piece and the art is amazing too!!
xoxo
😊💕🌹😁
Thanks so much Chuck! ☺️💕
My pleasure!! Loved it!
😁💕🌹
This resonates deeply 💝 It’s certainly a tango of sorts as we seek to comprehend the emotions engulfing us from all sides. 🙂
Yes Sanaa. Complicated steps that can be dangerous if not executed properly, at least in the Argentine Tango! ☺️💕
This is an energetic dance towards an inescapable conclusion: sometimes the dance becomes too much and we have to step aside.
Very well interpreted Ingrid. Time to change partners maybe? ☺️ Thanks so much.
Tangled magnetic force! Well written, Christine!
Thanks Punam ☺️💕
My pleasure, dear. 🥰
Your magnetic force
is like rubbing against
sharp edges
of bad feelings
This says it all! The pain of cutting unwanted magnetism!
Well done!
Thank you so much Dwight! ☺️ I appreciate it
You are welcome!
Tangled. Awesome.
Thanks Ron ☺️
Have to know when to walk/run away! Well described 🙂
Thank you Dora ☺️💕
Some magnets come on too strong!
Ha! Yes indeed they do ☺️
A tangled tango of emotions, indeed. I have been there. You have described it well.
Thanks De ☺️
This is so visceral and vulnerable. Wow. Amazing writing, as always!
You’re so sweet Lucy. Aww, thanks so much ☺️💕
Wow! Great.
Thanks dear ☺️💕
Always a pleasure
life is a tango of emotions and that is normally were us poets find ourselfs.
Ah…yes, so true ☺️