Oh my….this “twisted” for me. I thought it was going to be about positive passion….and then you end it
“Your magnetic force
is like rubbing against
sharp edges
of bad feelings
Revelations come
rushing in
I have had enough”
Like rubbing against sharp edges is the most visceral and damning for the relationship. Very glad to see the affirmative final line.
life is a tango of emotions and that is normally were us poets find ourselfs.
Ah…yes, so true ☺️
Wow! Great.
Thanks dear ☺️💕
Always a pleasure
This is so visceral and vulnerable. Wow. Amazing writing, as always!
You’re so sweet Lucy. Aww, thanks so much ☺️💕
A tangled tango of emotions, indeed. I have been there. You have described it well.
Thanks De ☺️
Some magnets come on too strong!
Ha! Yes indeed they do ☺️
Have to know when to walk/run away! Well described 🙂
Thank you Dora ☺️💕
Tangled. Awesome.
Thanks Ron ☺️
Your magnetic force
is like rubbing against
sharp edges
of bad feelings
This says it all! The pain of cutting unwanted magnetism!
Well done!
Thank you so much Dwight! ☺️ I appreciate it
You are welcome!
Tangled magnetic force! Well written, Christine!
Thanks Punam ☺️💕
My pleasure, dear. 🥰
This is an energetic dance towards an inescapable conclusion: sometimes the dance becomes too much and we have to step aside.
Very well interpreted Ingrid. Time to change partners maybe? ☺️ Thanks so much.
This resonates deeply 💝 It’s certainly a tango of sorts as we seek to comprehend the emotions engulfing us from all sides. 🙂
Yes Sanaa. Complicated steps that can be dangerous if not executed properly, at least in the Argentine Tango! ☺️💕
Wow! A really wonderful piece and the art is amazing too!!
xoxo
😊💕🌹😁
Thanks so much Chuck! ☺️💕
My pleasure!! Loved it!
😁💕🌹
Oh my….this “twisted” for me. I thought it was going to be about positive passion….and then you end it
“Your magnetic force
is like rubbing against
sharp edges
of bad feelings
Revelations come
rushing in
I have had enough”
Like rubbing against sharp edges is the most visceral and damning for the relationship. Very glad to see the affirmative final line.
Thank you Lillian. It’s the expression, “It takes two to tango” that infers there is something up ☺️
From such abrasive magnetism only distancing helps.
Yes, change partners perhaps ☺️
rubbing against sharp edges of feelings — love it, so evocative. 🙂
Thanks so much 💕☺️
These are great lines, Christine! I really enjoyed the tempo and force of it. 🙂
Thanks so much Susi 🥰
You are very welcome, Christine! 🙂