This is like a murder ballad… have you ever listened to Nick Cave’s record with the same time. This reminds me of “Where the Wild Roses Grow” were he sung duet with Kylie Minogue.
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Christine Bolton
May 5, 2021 at 11:23 pm
No I did not know it but I just watched the video. Oh yes, most similar apart from the rock. Quite creepy really 😦
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Beverly Crawford
May 5, 2021 at 11:16 am
What a dark tale! It rushes along to the climax, drawing us along with your words. Well done.
Excellent Christine, so well written! But very dark…
Thanks so much Rob. Yes a little dark 😳☺️
This is incredibly dark and potent, Christine! I love how elegantly you have carried out the theme of love gone wrong 💝💝
Thank you Sanaa. It’s fun to go to the dark side in our writing every now and again ☺️
How sad and tragic that ending. Like what was said, it was a twist in the story.
Thank you Grace. Yes a deadly twist 😦
Dark!.
Lol I know ☺️ the prompt called for it 😳😦
Nicely done. Some guys just can’t handle rejection.
Thanks Ron. Chilling isn’t it? 😦
This is like a murder ballad… have you ever listened to Nick Cave’s record with the same time. This reminds me of “Where the Wild Roses Grow” were he sung duet with Kylie Minogue.
No I did not know it but I just watched the video. Oh yes, most similar apart from the rock. Quite creepy really 😦
What a dark tale! It rushes along to the climax, drawing us along with your words. Well done.
Thank you Beverly. I’m happy it worked ☺️💕🌺
Cool poem! It reminds me of the Neil Young song “Down By the River”
Oh right Nick! I had completely forgotten about that song ☺️👍
This is so dark and sinister Christine! It fits the prompt perfectly, thank you 🙂 How unrequited love turns bitter and then deadly…
Thank Ingrid. I am happy it worked ☺️
Oh wow, Christine I was not expecting the twist! It’s so interesting how in some peoples’ minds love and murder go hand in hand!
Thanks Lisa. Yes I agree although I couldn’t quite get the female to do the murdering! 😳👍
You’re welcome 🙂
Surprise ending ❤️
Thanks Paula. It was Macabre Night! ☺️
Very well written Christine. It’s very dark story
Thanks Sadje. The prompt was dark so I went with it 😧💕🌺
You’re welcome 😉