
Common Language
Her early morning beach walk cleared the lingering fog in her head. Remnants of heady passion from the night before were hard to shake off.
Surprised to see him when she had opened her eyes. Sunlight shining on his bronzed body. She’d half expected him to have left without a word. She panicked slightly, and pulled on her shirt slipping silently out the door.
She sat studying the clouds.
“There you are” she heard a voice say
She turned. He was walking along the damp sand towards her.
“Why did you leave?” he asked. His voice slightly accented.
“Just looking for familiar objects in these clouds.” she answered without thinking.
“But these clouds are clearly foreign, such an exotic clutter against the blue cloth of the sky”, he said.
“Clouds speak in the universal language”, her voice a little husky. “Don’t you know that?”
Copyright © 2021 Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing All Rights Reserved Merril is hosting D’Verse Poets Prosery Monday and has prompted us with ‘Clouds’. We are to use the following lines: “But these clouds are clearly foreign, such an exotic clutter Against the blue cloth of the sky” –from “Clouds” by Constance Urdang Prosery is a piece of flash fiction no ,longer than 144 words, excluding the title. Image by MustangJoe from Pixabay
oooooh. love how seamlessly you used those lines. well done!
Thanks so much! I appreciate it ☺️💕
Your clouds are positively steamy!
Your story makes me wonder who these two people are, and if they will see each again.
Thanks Merril. Maybe I should develop them ☺️😳
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You’ve made me want to hear her husky voice! <3
Well written, Christine!
Yours,
David
Thank you David ☺️💕
I found myself sinking into your prose .. not wanting to leave. Very nice.
Thanks Helen! ☺️💕
So lovely and romantic Christine.
Thanks Di ☺️🌺💕 I’m happy you liked it.
Enjoyed the details in this!
Thanks so much Tricia! ☺️💕. Maybe one day I’ll expand these scenes write a short story. I do enjoy Monday Prosery.
Oooh! I love this, Christine! 😊❤️
Aww thanks Punam ☺️💕🌺
My pleasure, dear.
Great story Christine. You’ve captured the feeling perfectly and used the prompt so well.
Thanks so much. I really appreciate that Sadje ☺️💕🌺
You’re welcome
Smoky and intimate prosery that I enjoyed reading very much, Christine.
Thank you Lisa. I’m happy you enjoyed it ☺️💕
You’re welcome <3 🙂