Poem for a Pup

Poem for a Pup

Puppy doodle doo
Give me back that shoe
It’s not your doggie plaything

But you look at me
With eyes that see
Deep into my everything

How can I be angry
You are likely hungry
And it’s your way of pleading

Your actions do say
"Mama I want to play
This is something I’m needing"

Let’s go on a jaunt
Whatever you want
I’ll always be here for you

Fetch me that ball
I will give you my all
You’re my puppy doodle doo


Copyright © 2021 Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing
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Ingrid is hosting D'Verse Poets tonight and has prompted us with Oral Poetry.
Begin to compose a poem without putting pen to paper: you can say the words in your head, or repeat them out loud. Record them, if you wish, as an aid to memory. Try to complete the poem as far as possible without writing it down. Think about the devices discussed above: regular rhythms, repeated phrases or ‘motifs’, alliteration and rhyme schemes – anything to aid the memory and help the words to flow. Alternatively, why not compose a stream-of-consciousness poem orally, recording the words as they come to you?
There are no strict rules here, but do try to compose at least some of the poem without writing it down immediately, perhaps stanza by stanza. Once you have written it down, read it aloud to yourself, and think about any improvements you could make: a kind of oral editing process.

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  35 comments for “Poem for a Pup

  1. September 4, 2021 at 3:06 am

    Nice post

    • Christine Bolton
      September 4, 2021 at 11:01 am

      Thank you! Just a sweet ode to a sweet pup ☺️💕

  2. September 2, 2021 at 2:15 am

    🐶 Cuteness overload! 🐶

    -David

    • Christine Bolton
      September 2, 2021 at 9:02 pm

      Yes David. It felt good to write a cute poem ☺️🥰

  3. September 1, 2021 at 11:47 pm

    I loves my doggy

    • Christine Bolton
      September 2, 2021 at 8:48 pm

      Oh me too! 🥰

  4. September 1, 2021 at 6:43 pm

    that was a cute poem, i like that snappy beat, loved that picture too

    • Christine Bolton
      September 1, 2021 at 7:07 pm

      Thanks Phillip! I would have used a photo of my Black Lab but I didn’t have one of her with a shoe. She’s very cute 🥰

      • September 2, 2021 at 11:21 am

        Aww Christine! So adorable!❤️😊

      • Christine Bolton
        September 2, 2021 at 8:41 pm

        Thanks Punam ☺️💕

  5. September 1, 2021 at 2:58 pm

    So sweet and fun… you better keep a ball ready to save your shoes.

    • Christine Bolton
      September 1, 2021 at 7:00 pm

      Thanks! Yes, she likes shoes to steal ☺️ But she’ll play with a ball all day long!

  6. September 1, 2021 at 12:18 pm

    Unmistakable …. your voice and puppy shenanigans!!!

    • September 1, 2021 at 12:38 pm

      Yes Helen! I always call her puppy doodle doo ☺️🐾❤️

  7. Beverly Crawford
    September 1, 2021 at 11:27 am

    A playful interaction with a well-loved pet!

    • September 1, 2021 at 12:36 pm

      Thanks Bev. Yes you’re right ☺️🌺🐶

  8. September 1, 2021 at 12:35 am

    Such a wonderful lubby dubby buddy that makes the world a welcoming place. There’s magic in that puppy.

    • Christine Bolton
      September 1, 2021 at 7:29 am

      Thanks Lisa. They are so special ☺️💕

      • September 1, 2021 at 12:58 pm

        You’re welcome 🙂 <3

  9. August 31, 2021 at 11:47 pm

    This is so sweet, and it cuts straight to the heart:

    ‘With eyes that see
    Deep into my everything’

    The love between human and animals can be deep and profound like that. Thank you for taking part Christine ❤️

    • Christine Bolton
      September 1, 2021 at 12:25 am

      Thanks Ingrid. A child-like poem ☺️💕🐶🐾

      • September 1, 2021 at 12:41 am

        😊💕🐶

  10. August 31, 2021 at 11:33 pm

    They are spoiled babies, aren’t they? 🐶 Fun little didley!

    • Christine Bolton
      September 1, 2021 at 12:24 am

      Thanks Tricia. I needed something light-hearted tonight ☺️🐾💕

  11. August 31, 2021 at 9:23 pm

    our furry friends smother us with joy and love

    • Christine Bolton
      August 31, 2021 at 11:06 pm

      Yes they do Ivor ☺️🐾💕 I wouldn’t be without a dog ❤️

  12. August 31, 2021 at 9:22 pm

    Just adorable.

    • Christine Bolton
      August 31, 2021 at 11:05 pm

      Thank you Sadje ☺️🌺🐾🐶

      • September 1, 2021 at 12:03 am

        You’re welcome

  13. August 31, 2021 at 9:21 pm

    AWWWWW, that is adorable and very true as a pet owner. I do this with my black cat, he’ll be ripping into something and making a mess, and I’m about to stop him but then realize I don’t have the heart to! I want him happy lol.

    • Christine Bolton
      August 31, 2021 at 11:04 pm

      Yes they are all so special aren’t they Lucy ☺️🌺🐾 🐈‍⬛

  14. sanaarizvi
    August 31, 2021 at 8:36 pm

    This is absolutely adorable, Christine! 😀

    • Christine Bolton
      August 31, 2021 at 11:03 pm

      Thanks you Sanaa. I just thought if nursery rhymes with this prompt ☺️🌺💕 🐾

  15. August 31, 2021 at 7:34 pm

    nice one

    Happy Tuesday

    much❤love

    • Christine Bolton
      September 2, 2021 at 8:54 pm

      Thanks so much Gillena. ❤️ Sorry for the delay in replying, your comment was in spam 😦

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