10 comments for “Daily Haiku – Sat. September 11, 2021

  1. September 11, 2021 at 12:20 pm

    Although I imagine it is not about this; when I read it I pictured a woman crouched down reaching out to a child. Likely one she is adopting. And the little person (can’t decide boy or girl) solemnly staring at her as though debating whether or not to trust her. 🙂

    • Christine Bolton
      September 11, 2021 at 12:33 pm

      You’re right it wasn’t! I do love the way you go to the dark side 🤣. It could be the beginning of a horror story/poem/movie by Jay-lyn 👍💕

      • September 11, 2021 at 12:36 pm

        This is I think the third one of your Haikus that have given me a very vivid image. One was the one I mentioned about hazy romantic art type pic of woman sitting under willows crying in the rain. 2nd was the one that had me imagining a young man in a house smack dab in the middle of no where surrounded by nothing with an old skeletal tree and you hear a gun shot ring out. And this one. I never thought of it in a horror way I was thinking more a child who had seen more than they should in their young life trying to decide if this woman truly will love and care for them. Can they trust her?

      • Christine Bolton
        September 11, 2021 at 12:51 pm

        You have a very creative mind, that’s for sure! You should think about tying all three together into a story perhaps ☺️👍

      • September 11, 2021 at 12:52 pm

        I might actually give that a shot. Thank you. 😊

      • Christine Bolton
        September 11, 2021 at 1:19 pm

        I would love to read it ☺️💕👍

      • September 11, 2021 at 1:19 pm


  2. September 11, 2021 at 9:26 am

    Beautiful poetry. Well penned piece.

    • Christine Bolton
      September 11, 2021 at 9:42 am

      Thanks so much Bernadette. Hope you’re doing well ☺️💕🌺

      • September 11, 2021 at 9:56 am

        Yes indeed…all is well. Cheers

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