Senryu I will keep you safe Take that leap of faith with me Dive into my love Copyright © 2021 Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing All Rights Reserved
Daily Haiku – Sat. September 11, 2021
Finding Your Words
Senryu I will keep you safe Take that leap of faith with me Dive into my love Copyright © 2021 Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing All Rights Reserved
Although I imagine it is not about this; when I read it I pictured a woman crouched down reaching out to a child. Likely one she is adopting. And the little person (can’t decide boy or girl) solemnly staring at her as though debating whether or not to trust her. 🙂
You’re right it wasn’t! I do love the way you go to the dark side 🤣. It could be the beginning of a horror story/poem/movie by Jay-lyn 👍💕
This is I think the third one of your Haikus that have given me a very vivid image. One was the one I mentioned about hazy romantic art type pic of woman sitting under willows crying in the rain. 2nd was the one that had me imagining a young man in a house smack dab in the middle of no where surrounded by nothing with an old skeletal tree and you hear a gun shot ring out. And this one. I never thought of it in a horror way I was thinking more a child who had seen more than they should in their young life trying to decide if this woman truly will love and care for them. Can they trust her?
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You have a very creative mind, that’s for sure! You should think about tying all three together into a story perhaps ☺️👍
I might actually give that a shot. Thank you. 😊
I would love to read it ☺️💕👍
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Beautiful poetry. Well penned piece.
Thanks so much Bernadette. Hope you’re doing well ☺️💕🌺
Yes indeed…all is well. Cheers