Sun
Breaking the night in orange glow
Rising in the sky but still slow
is sunlight
Streaking though the limbs of oak trees
Catching dust particles with ease
are sunbeams
Dancing on water’s gentle waves
Sparkling diamonds memory saves
as sun-kissed
Tanning bodies on sandy shores
Skin soaking in lotion one pours
for sunburn
As the day wears on it sinks low
Towards the west it now must go
to sunset
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Grace is hosting D'Verse Poets and she has prompted us with
Compound Word Verse.
The Compound Word Verse is a poetry form invented by Margaret R. Smith that consists of five 3-line stanzas, for a total of 15 lines. The last line of each stanza ends in a compound word and these compound words share a common stem word which is taken from the title. (In the first example below the stem word is “moon” from the title “Moonlighting”; the compound words related to the title are moondust, moonbeams, moonsongs, etc.)
The Compound Word Verse (3 lines) has a set rhyme scheme and meter as follows:
Rhyme Scheme: a,a,b
Syllable/Meter: 8, 8, 3
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From sunrise to sunset… we have the sun as our companion…
Yes, and what a companion! ☺️🌞
Nailed it!! A great write!
Thanks so much Carol ☺️💕
Sigh. This was so lovely. I especially liked the third stanza with memory saving that vision.
Thanks so much Merril. The sun was an easy pick – it does so much ☺️☀️🌞
Yes, it does, and you’re welcome. 🌞
Well, this was a ray of sunshine!
Aww thanks Bev ☀️☺️
Wow! Love this, Christine. 😊💞
Oh I’m so pleased Punam 🌞🌺 Thank you!
You are welcome. ☺️
This is so lovely …. makes me wish to escape our wintry weather and head off to a beach somewhere warm.
Yes Helen! Come back to Florida ☀️
From sunrise to sunset, the sun is a beauty to behold. Thanks for joining in our fun writing challenge.
Yes it was a lot of fun Grace! Thank you ☺️
Well done. Christine.
Thank you dear Regina ☺️💕
Beautiful, bright, and sunny writing Christine — warms my heart! 🌞
Thank you so much Rob! ☺️💕
A beautiful tracing of the sun’s journey across the sky, and its action upon us!
Thanks Ingrid 😦💕. The sun was an easy one for me. Maybe I should have tried harder 😞
A shining performance to follow the format Christine
https://youtu.be/0E1bNmyPWww
Thanks for your kind words and the video Ivor ☺️💕
My pleasure Christine 😊🌏
A treat to senses Christine
Thank you 😊 💕
You’re welcome my friend