“In her mind she pictured him/Tall and olive-skinned perhaps/The accent so slight/and hardly noticeable,”… sigh this is soo dreamy 😀 beautifully worded, Christine!
I like how you left the poem in ambiguity – was it the voice of a honey-trap seducer, a lover, or the first contact from a dating app – this a perfect description
“the most basic word
poetic and honeyed”
This is really sensual…..the detail has a certain cheekiness…the slight accent! I really liked this very much, as a wonderful poem, for its vibrancy and literary lust
“In her mind she pictured him/Tall and olive-skinned perhaps/The accent so slight/and hardly noticeable,”… sigh this is soo dreamy 😀 beautifully worded, Christine!
Thank you Sanaa ☺️❤️
I love this and I find it amazing how much a voice can tempt and soothe.
Yes I am always moved by certain voices ☺️
Ahhhh… I had the same experience just READING you words! Thanks.
What a lovely thing to say! Thank you so much Ron ☺️
Oh, how delightful, Christine! May all scalded souls be soothed in such a way 😊
Thank you Ingrid ☺️💕
I like how you left the poem in ambiguity – was it the voice of a honey-trap seducer, a lover, or the first contact from a dating app – this a perfect description
“the most basic word
poetic and honeyed”
Thank you Laura! ☺️💕
This is a wonderful mixture of words, I especially loved “A soothing balm
on a scalded soul”.
Thank you! ☺️💕
This is so beautiful Christine.
Thanks Sadje ☺️💕
You’re welcome
“A soothing balm
on a scalded soul” – beautiful!
Thank you so much ☺️💕
This is really sensual…..the detail has a certain cheekiness…the slight accent! I really liked this very much, as a wonderful poem, for its vibrancy and literary lust
Aww you’re so kind Ain. Thank you my friend ☺️
I’ve gotta second Ain.
Indeed!
<3
David
Thanks David ☺️💕