Praying Mantis

Praying Mantis

A slow controlled walk across the vast empty space 	
Each step controlled and purposeful
as was she
A solitary creature without distraction 
At one point stopping as if frozen in time
Not a hair on her head moved
Breathing barely visible
Long and slender limbs holding an arched frame
Her green suit blended in to the surroundings as if invisible
She had spotted her prey and watched him carefully
He was unaware of her presence
Oblivious to what she was planning
He turned ever so slightly
realizing she was there
and the mating ritual began
When finished and with the same effortless precision
she devoured him


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Lisa from Tao Talk is hosting D'Verse tonight and has given us the prompt of living
things - animals, mammals, insects etc.

Factoid:

A praying mantis is not only carnivorous but a vast majority is also cannibalistic — meaning they will eat others (even of the same species) when they have the chance. So the general advice is to keep praying mantis solitary. They enjoy being on their own and most species don't tolerate any competition.

  23 comments for “Praying Mantis

  1. April 15, 2023 at 9:00 pm

    Good for her! He probably deserved it! 😉

    • Christine Bolton
      April 16, 2023 at 2:50 pm

      LOL! Yes he probably did 🤣🤣

      • April 16, 2023 at 7:25 pm

        🙂

  2. April 10, 2023 at 6:01 am
  3. April 5, 2023 at 6:57 pm

    I’ve always found this creature fascinating! Your poem does her justice! well done.

    • Christine Bolton
      April 5, 2023 at 9:37 pm

      Thanks do much Lillian 💕☺️

  4. April 5, 2023 at 2:20 pm

    I love how you captured her movement and her purposefulness. I think I can hear Richard Attenborough in the background

    • Christine Bolton
      April 5, 2023 at 6:21 pm

      Thank you very much. They are fascinating creatures to watch. I like that you mentioned Richard Attenborough! ☺️

  5. sanaarizvi
    April 5, 2023 at 12:49 pm

    This is absolutely stellar writing, Christine! I especially like; “Long and slender limbs holding an arched frame/Her green suit blended in to the surroundings as if invisible.”❤️❤️

    • Christine Bolton
      April 5, 2023 at 6:16 pm

      Thank you so much Sanaa. Yours always so kind ☺️💕❤️

  6. April 5, 2023 at 11:10 am

    Well written, Christine. Sometimes in my life, it has been nearly the opposite, with me, the female, almost devoured through violence. But, I prevailed, thanks be to God.

    • Christine Bolton
      April 5, 2023 at 6:17 pm

      Thank you Regina. Yes I remember your story. What a blessing you have your faith to keep you strong ❤️☺️

  7. April 5, 2023 at 7:02 am

    Such a great take 😊

    • Christine Bolton
      April 9, 2023 at 11:34 am

      Thank you so much ☺️💕

  8. April 5, 2023 at 4:05 am

    A detailed personification of the praying mantis, Christine! I especially like the lines:
    ‘Long and slender limbs holding an arched frame
    Her green suit blended in to the surroundings as if invisible’.
    You handled the gruesome ending with sensitivity

    • Christine Bolton
      April 9, 2023 at 11:33 am

      Thank you Kim. I really appreciate it. Happy Easter 🐣🐇☺️💕

      • April 9, 2023 at 12:06 pm

        Happy Easter to you, Christine!

  9. April 4, 2023 at 10:19 pm

    Christine, you paid such wonderful tribute to this Queen of Insects. Her nature cannot be compromised. I’m sure many go willingly into her arms. Love your poem <3

    • Christine Bolton
      April 4, 2023 at 10:52 pm

      Thank you so much Lisa. I had this running through my mind for several days and then I saw your prompt tonight – Perfect! Thanks for the timing ☺️💕

  10. April 4, 2023 at 9:47 pm

    A gruesome mating ritual. So well written Christine

    • Christine Bolton
      April 4, 2023 at 10:01 pm

      😳 I know Sadje. Yikes!

      • April 4, 2023 at 10:30 pm

        😅

      • April 4, 2023 at 10:32 pm

        😜

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