
Dark Past
Her honey-colored hair reminded him of the late afternoon sun when he had first seen her. She was standing at the lakeshore looking across, as if searching for something or someone. He had often caught glimpses of her in the long shadows, always looking out at the water. She was a visitor, not a local, he was sure of that. He found himself timing his schedule to coincide with her afternoon walks just so he could see her again. His interest in her was almost becoming an obsession.
Attracted to the mystery surrounding her he felt those old familiar urges stirring in his body. Resurfacing from that dark, cold place he had vacated long ago. It frightened him. He could still hear his therapist’s voice in his head, “Remember Robert, for beauty is nothing but the beginning of terror, for the other person
Copyright © 2023 Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing All Rights Reserved Mish is hosting Prosery Monday at D'Verse Poets. Her prompt tonight is: The line I have chosen for you to include in your prose is from the poem, “The First Elegy”, Duinos Elegies by Rainer Maria Rilke. You can find the entire poem here. "For beauty is nothing but the beginning of terror.” Prosery is a piece of flash fiction consisting of no more than 144 words total excluding the title. The piece should include the prompt line from Mish's chosen poem
Well done, Christine!
Thanks Susi. One day I will write more than 144 words 🤣 LOL
You’re welcome! Or never, that’s ok too! lol
Your prose skillfully explores the complexities of human emotions and the entanglement of past and present, making it a compelling and evocative piece. Captivating work! 🌄🌊🖋️
Thank you so much. ☺️
Oh very creepy – good write 🙌
Thank you so much ☺️💕
I would be quite interested in a continuation of this well penned piece of prosery …….
Aww thanks Helen ☺️💕
Very engaging. The word “obsession” became the ominous turn. Yikes
Yes! If I’d had more words I would have described him 😦
Ooooo! I hope she leaves town before it’s too late. I have a feeling he won’t be able to resist. I like the way you continued the prompt line.
Yeah he’s creepy isn’t he? 😧
He is!!
Lol 🤣
The prompt line was perfect for venturing into the dark, Christine, and I love the way you moved from the sublime to the scary, without spelling it out.
Hi Kim , I thought I had answered this lovely comment of yours. But I might’ve missed it. So sorry and thank you. ☺️💕
Very fine, Christine. I liked the way you eased into the prompt line, pinning the other person.
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Thank you Jim. I really appreciate it.
Oh so touching
Thank you so much, my friend ☺️💕
You’re most welcome
Oh, Christine, you followed a dark tilt on this one. They say an addict is never cured, only in recovery… I pray he resists those old urges!
Oh I did! That line was so deliciously dark to me Lisa 😌💕
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