I have been writing poetry since I was a child and it has helped in the good times and bad times. I am always looking within to find the answers to life's problems and to write thought-provoking poetry and prose.
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Christine
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35 thoughts on “Flushed – A Quadrille”
“A joust for power” indeed. Powerful images here. Well done.
You are very kind Rita. Thank you. Is the type of plan I have it does not allow for a reblog button. Oh well … you could always share the link I suppose. I appreciate your good words. 🥰
“A joust for power” indeed. Powerful images here. Well done.
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Thank you so much De Jackson 🙂 I enjoyed the prompt
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You squeezed the maximum power out of 44 words; wow. I liked /his indignation was center stage/ and /oxygen feeding the fire of dysfunction/.
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Why thank you kindly sir 🙂 I appreciate it very much Glenn and happy you enjoyed it.
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Very intense.
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Thanks Sadje, I was feeling a little intense today 🙂👍
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You’re welcome.
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A very intense moment of flushed anger and flushed history! Well done!
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It’s not healthy to keep all that in. . .
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Sometimes relationships are just that flushable. Dysfunction can only be tolerated for so long.
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You are so right Mish! Thanks for the funny prompt. I wonder when we will ever be able to buy TP again 😦
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This is intense, bravo!!!
Happy Monday
Much💛love
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Thanks so much Gillena ☺️
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Good description of relationships with jousting for power and button pushing.
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Thanks Frank. Sometimes I feel like I am describing my life way too many times 🤣
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Beautiful! Loved the lines “A lifetime of giving / her everything flushed”
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Thanks so much Robin 🙂
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You covered a lot of territory in 44 short words. Well done! I liked “a lifetime of giving flushed away” … so often happens.
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Relationships are so hard sometimes! Wonderful poeml
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Thanks so much Mary 🙂
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this is one of those poems that deserves to be read again and again and again and again..
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Thank you so much! 😌 That means a lot to me 🥰
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Oh dear, relationships should be partnerships, not jousts for power. The ending is shocking in its simplicity, Christine.
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Yes you’re so right Kim. Thanks so much 🙂
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Joust for power… too many times this seems to happpen
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Sometime it is best to just flush!
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Lol! Exactly 🤣
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😉
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This is too good. Just noticed there is no Reblog button. Would have liked to share.
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You are very kind Rita. Thank you. Is the type of plan I have it does not allow for a reblog button. Oh well … you could always share the link I suppose. I appreciate your good words. 🥰
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Your blog title is one I live by.
I enjoyed your poem.
These words in particular create a clear picture.
“His indignation
was center stage”
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Thanks so much Ali. I really appreciate it ☺️💕
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Really powerful words, I like it!
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Thanks Christine! 🙂
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