Golden fields of wheat blowing in summer breeze Reminiscent of her wayward, flaxen hair The color of the sun and bees’ honey Her hands would pull it back and tie with a satin ribbon Her eyes blue like the sky and face sun-kissed with freckles The picture of summer A time of growth and abundance Until the wheat harvest and fields lay bare Fall would come and take her with the warmth Leaving an emptiness Cold and bare A time to mourn her haunting absence but she would return She always did When the days grew long again and the wheat would wave once more
I have been writing poetry since I was a child and it has helped in the good times and bad times. I am always looking within to find the answers to life's problems and to write thought-provoking poetry and prose.
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Christine
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What a stunning shift from ‘golden fields of wheat / blowing in summer breeze’ to bare fields and cold emptiness but, thankfully, ending with hope in wheat waving once more. A beautiful, natural cycle, Christine.
Oh, I love this–“her wayward, flaxen hair “is so good–and the ghostly spirit returning each year to the wheat fields. I can imagine this as a tale told around the fire.
Thank you Ain. I can see why you might think that. I remember writing something about golden fields with reference to Ukraine a couple of years ago. I will have to look for it ☺️
Wow! I so loved this! It was awesome in the evoking of emotions and imagery! Loved the journey from now to the letting go and end of Autumn, but the understanding and hope of the season returning and looking forward to the season coming in the future!!! I Love Autumn!! Thanks for making the experience more impactful and lovely! Chuck 😊😁💕🌹
Thanks Lisa. It’s almost like an old story or legend of a mystery woman that comes every summer and frolicks through the wheat fields only to disappear after harvest until the next summer ☺️
I feel like I opened a scroll of wisdom & beauty. This reminds me of the Ukrainian flag where it’s supposed to resemble a golden field & sunny sky. Also, of a little girl galloping in the fields with the wind flying in her golden locks where she is free from any worries. It truly is mesmerising! I love your masterpiece! Have a great day ahead! BBB
So beautiful and evocative Christine
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Thank you Sadje ☺️❤️
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You’re welcome
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Beautiful poem.
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Thank you so much ☺️💕
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What a stunning shift from ‘golden fields of wheat / blowing in summer breeze’ to bare fields and cold emptiness but, thankfully, ending with hope in wheat waving once more. A beautiful, natural cycle, Christine.
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Thank you Kim. The Autumn gives us much to write about doesn’t it? ☺️💕
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It does!
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Oh, I love this–“her wayward, flaxen hair “is so good–and the ghostly spirit returning each year to the wheat fields. I can imagine this as a tale told around the fire.
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Thank you Merril ☺️ I really appreciate it.
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You’re very welcome, Christine!
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A haunting portrayal.
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Beautiful, dipping down and back up…for me almost feels like a tribute to Ukraine.
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Thank you Ain. I can see why you might think that. I remember writing something about golden fields with reference to Ukraine a couple of years ago. I will have to look for it ☺️
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Wow! I so loved this! It was awesome in the evoking of emotions and imagery! Loved the journey from now to the letting go and end of Autumn, but the understanding and hope of the season returning and looking forward to the season coming in the future!!! I Love Autumn!! Thanks for making the experience more impactful and lovely!
Chuck
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Thanks dear Chuck ☺️💕 so nice of you as always.
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Love the way she always come back…
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Yes she does! Thanks 😊
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I read and enjoyed Christine — thank you. 🙂✌🏼🫶🏼
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Thanks Rob
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Beautiful, Christine, so evocative! ❤️😊
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Thanks so much Punam ☺️❤️
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Christine, I like this gentle kind of haunting.
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Thanks Lisa. It’s almost like an old story or legend of a mystery woman that comes every summer and frolicks through the wheat fields only to disappear after harvest until the next summer ☺️
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🙂 Exactly, Christine. Thanks for bringing her to life.
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I feel like I opened a scroll of wisdom & beauty. This reminds me of the Ukrainian flag where it’s supposed to resemble a golden field & sunny sky. Also, of a little girl galloping in the fields with the wind flying in her golden locks where she is free from any worries. It truly is mesmerising! I love your masterpiece! Have a great day ahead! BBB
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Thank you so much. Most kind. Another blogger also made a reference to reminding him of the Ukraine. I can see that. Thank you for stoppingby. ☺️
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