
You hum and haw
Fuss and fluster
causing a commotion
You’re annoying
as anyone could be
But you’re a hoot
How about this?
Or maybe that?
Oh spare me
Am I aggravating? You ask
Is the Pope Catholic? I respond
You daft old coot
Copyright © 2025 Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing
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De Jackson is hosting Monday Quadrille at D’Verse Poets and has prompted us with the word “Hoot”
A Quadrille is a poem of exactly 44 words, excluding the title.
Love it
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Thanks Jodi 🥰
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Great advice, Christine 😎👍
(The Pope is Catholic! You sure?
I thought he’s Rastafarian 🤔🕶️)
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Yeah maybe right David. 🤣😳
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Excellent, Christine!
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Thanks Nancy! 🥰
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Awww I love the affectionate volley here. That is a very cool picture. I didn’t not see the face at first.
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Thanks so much Li. Just a little fun to be poked 🤣
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Haha! A great take
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Thanks Sadje 🥰
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You’re welcome
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I hope I am correct and there is an underlying feeling of endearment here?
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Oh definitely Sean ☺️
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Dynamic energy keeps us on our toes! Entertaining poem.
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Awww. Sometimes those daft old coots are the ones who need our ear (and love) the most. 😉 There’s love in your words, so I suspect you already know that. Love the “hoot”/”coot” rhyme.
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It sounds like a lot of fun despite the commotion.
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Indeed!!
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Christine, I love the playful banter in this one! The back-and-forth is hilarious, and the way you bring in the “daft old coot” is just perfect. Definitely a hoot! 😄
Much love,
David
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Thanks David ☺️ I had to find something out of the boot and loot that rhymed with hoot!! 🤣 I’m happy you liked it.
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I needed that laugh, and that hoot/coot rhyme too!!! 😂🤣
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Thanks so much Dora! 🤣🤣
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haha! That was great, Christine!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thanks Yvette ☺️💗
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