The rusted nail hammered into my heart remains in place Releasing toxins into my bloodstream constantly reminding me that I still suffer from your actions
Your unconquerable demons placed the tools in your hands Urging you to sabotage our perfect world and so you did Inexplicably Inflicting excruciating pain
Time has passed and from a safe distance now I choose to only see the goodness in you The part I loved and still love Knowing we can never be together again
I have been writing poetry since I was a child and it has helped in the good times and bad times. I am always looking within to find the answers to life's problems and to write thought-provoking poetry and prose.
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Christine
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27 thoughts on “The Rusted Nail”
I like the symbolism of the rusted nail. Rust being a living thing that require a living host to feed off of. Very visual.
Am so glad you shared it! The rusty nail is a good metaphor here…..that pain and emotion is palpable in your words here. I like the transition at the end….”from a safe distance”…..and choosing a positive attitude by removing oneself….knowing we can never be together again.
I like the symbolism of the rusted nail. Rust being a living thing that require a living host to feed off of. Very visual.
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Thanks Jodi. I am happy you liked it ☺️💗
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Rust is corrosive – great imagery Christine, I feel this deeply …. 💞Suzanne
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Oh Suzanne, thank you so much. I appreciate it 🥰
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That is very powerful stuff, Christine..
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Thanks Ain. I hope you are well my friend 🥰
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Touching poem!
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Thank you Reena 🥰
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A very moving poem Christine
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Thank you dear friend ☺️💗
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You’re welcome
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I felt this one Christine
Thank you for sharing!
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Thanks Maggie. I was hoping it was relatable 🥰
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It was Christine.🤗
My pleasure Christine.😘
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The rusty nail is a strong visual that hammers the message of your words. Some relationships aren’t good .
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Thank you Trudessa. That’s right, they’re not 😕
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Am so glad you shared it! The rusty nail is a good metaphor here…..that pain and emotion is palpable in your words here. I like the transition at the end….”from a safe distance”…..and choosing a positive attitude by removing oneself….knowing we can never be together again.
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Thank you Lillian. You are always so kind with your comments and feedback. I really appreciate it. ☺️💗
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Well done, Christine. The picture really illustrates your words perfectly! Beauty and pain sometimes live together in our lives.
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Yes they do don’t they Dwight. Thank you so much ☺️💕
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Wonderful
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Thank you Shreya ☺️💗
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A powerful poem, I thought…
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Excellent use of symbolism in this one, Christine! ❤️❤️
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That image of the rusty nail works so well to describe the lingering efffects afterward
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This was excellent Christine! ❤ your very talented!
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Aww thank you. I’m so happy you liked it ❤️☺️
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