Lillian is hosting D'Verse Poets tonight and she has asked us to feature one or more names of a candy from the list she provided. I managed to include three (italicized) in my poem.
I have been writing poetry since I was a child and it has helped in the good times and bad times. I am always looking within to find the answers to life's problems and to write thought-provoking poetry and prose.
Thanks for checking it out.
Christine
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You had me with the first stanza!!! And that first line, when I read it, puts me right into the poem. Well done and good use of the candy names. Thanks so much for posting to the prompt! Love it!
So beautiful Christine 💕
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Hi Maggie. Thank you so much ☺️❤️
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Hi Christine 🥰❤️ always my pleasure.
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A romantic first stanza, Christine; the poem turns on that crash to earth, with a sad ending. My favourite lines:
‘You hung the moonAnd tied the stars to ribbonsDraping them across the sky’.
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Thank you Kim. I enjoyed this fun prompt ☺️❤️
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Always a pleasure, Christine.
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So nicely done Christine
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Thanks so much Sadje. I always appreciate it ☺️❤️
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You’re welcome
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Such a beautiful, romantic image in the first stanza! I also really like the rain as polka dots. Lovely, Christine.
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Thank you Merril. I appreciate that so much ☺️❤️
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You’re very welcome, Christine.
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Love where you journeyed with this challenge, quite a clever path. Using the candies so well.
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Thank you Helen I appreciate it so much ☺️❤️
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You had me with the first stanza!!! And that first line, when I read it, puts me right into the poem. Well done and good use of the candy names. Thanks so much for posting to the prompt! Love it!
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You’re so kind Lillian. Thank you ☺️❤️
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This is incredibly evocative, Christine ❤️❤️
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Thank you Sanaa. You’re too kind. I appreciate it very much ☺️❤️
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Smooth, Christine, love the flow of your sad tale. Glad it finally ended up washing away.
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This is wonderful, Christine. Lovely read.
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Thank you Nancy. So kind of you 🥰
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Beautiful poem, Christine!
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Thank you Yvette! 🥰
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