
He Says, She Says – A Sonnet
’Tis the shard of glass you wield
That will slice into my dignity
Cutting me where flesh does not yield
Whenever you have the opportunity
I may have wronged you in the past
But sir, it was not intentional
Onerous aspersions I did not cast
Although my actions unconventional
I provided you with an inch of suggestion
And you expropriated a mile of my generosity
A proposal in the form of a rhetorical question
Does not qualify you for any reciprocity
I say I love you, you say you love me more
We do not agree, and so we argue until evermore
Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing ©
In response to D'Verse Poets Meeting at the Bar
Enjambment in Sonnets, Hosted by Jilly
Word Prompts
Shard
Onerous
Opportunity
Inch
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Nice lines: “I provided you with an inch of suggestion
And you expropriated a mile of my generosity”
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Thank you Frank! I really appreciate it 🙂
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An exceptional piece that I thoroughly enjoyed.
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Thank you so much Ivor! 💕🙂
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Brilliant.
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Thank you so much! 🙂💕
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You’re welcome
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Nicely done, Christine.
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Thank you so much. I’m beginning to love Sonnets! Go figure 🙂
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I’m not quite there yet, lol.
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I’m OK as long as they don’t make me count syllables just yet! LOL 🙂
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Never count syllables… feel the 5 beats instead… then it’s much easier.
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Very nice poem!
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Thanks Irene! 🙂💕
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Wonderfully done! 😊💞
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Thanks you so much 🙂💕 I had fun with this one.
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Great! My pleasure! ❤️
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Well done, Christine. Sonnets have recently become a fascination of mine.
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Thanks Joey. Yes, me too. I like trying something different 🙂
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Sonnets can be fun–I went with humor on mine, but all the MTB prompts, working with classic forms, for me are adventures in word-smithing. My own free verse style gets tweaked as things appeal to me.
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Yes Glenn. I am enjoying this too. I regard as a challenge and it pushes me to wordsmith as you say! Thanks for reading 🙂 There is a lot to read this week isn’t there?
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You do this form so well! Glad you shared
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Thanks Jilly…I had fun 🙂
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I can actually feel how they are in love with the challenge of hurling words at each others…
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Yes quite a dysfunctional relationship! Thanks Bjorn 🙂
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Enjoyed that.
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Thank you!
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