I have been writing poetry since I was a child and it has helped in the good times and bad times. I am always looking within to find the answers to life's problems and to write thought-provoking poetry and prose.
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I like being immersed into this poem…into the feeling of being bereft and searching for my loved one…wondering why we are separated. I especially like these two descriptive words “cloudless canopy”….that is indeed a very dark sky.
The last three lines are the penultimate in lonliness for the writer (and thus the reader).
Well done.
“There is no I in WE” … a great line, but if we lost our I, will WE stay happy long? Something to ponder. ( I’ve always been somewhat suspicious of those wedding ceremonies where the bride and groom each take their lighted candle and light one large one, then snuff out their own.)
No I in we – that’s true!
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Thanks Philllip 🙂
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Poignant and loving!
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Thank you Sadje 🙂
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You’re welcome 😉
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Beautiful and poignant
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Thanks David 🙂
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There’s no “I” In “we”
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Thank you Ivor 🙂
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I like being immersed into this poem…into the feeling of being bereft and searching for my loved one…wondering why we are separated. I especially like these two descriptive words “cloudless canopy”….that is indeed a very dark sky.
The last three lines are the penultimate in lonliness for the writer (and thus the reader).
Well done.
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Thank you so much Lillian 🙂💕 I really appreciate it.
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Nice line: “No matter the weather” It is amazing how we cannot anticipate what the weather might be.
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So true. You’re either 50% right or 50% wrong! 🙂
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Such classy poetry.
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You’re so kind Joey. Thank you! 🙂
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“There is no I in WE” … a great line, but if we lost our I, will WE stay happy long? Something to ponder. ( I’ve always been somewhat suspicious of those wedding ceremonies where the bride and groom each take their lighted candle and light one large one, then snuff out their own.)
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Yes exactly! In my poem, perhaps that’s why they’re apart. You cannot lose your independence even in a marriage or relationship. Thanks Bev🙂💕
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With too much “I” there is never a “we”
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That’s right!
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Heartache often comes round when there is no WE to be found.
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Yes, sadly, that is the case 😢💕
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Loneliness is indeed a cry in the dark. (K)
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Yes it certainly is 😢 Thanks for reading. 💕
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