
Ripples
In youth we search for those appealing to the eye Their beauty would cause a heart to skip and our desires live at the forefront of their presence We decorate each other in brilliance of diamonds and hold the other in high esteem as a possession Only the most fortunate can hold on to the gift bestowed on them Many will lose their grasp and happiness slips away over and over The sting of pain unseen, internal Love a gift that keeps on giving Healing wounds Scars remain of memories faded Dissolving in the lake of recollection where coming, going, the waterbirds don’t leave a trace only ripples of once was Copyright © 2020 Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing All Rights Reserved Laura Bloomsbury is hosting D'Verse and has prompted us with "Stepping off the sidewalk" and allowing ourselves to look inside ourselves. (I chose number 2 - by Dogen) Here are 8 fragments from the mystic poets as prompt. Choose ONE, include the words in your poem or title if you wish, or write it as an Epigraph at the start of your poem and always cite the author too. 1. Our hearts irrigate the earth. We are fields before each other (Thomas Aquinas) 2. Coming, going, the waterbirds don’t leave a trace (Dogen) 3. Why should not the water find delight in the floral fragrance of its own rippled surface? (Jnanadev) 4. To melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night (Gibran) 5. Like a ruby held up to the sunrise. Is it still a stone, or a world made of redness? (Rumi) 6. My heart was split, and a flower appeared (Solomon) 7. The mountain path leads skyward and dissolves into light (Tukaram) 8. Ask no questions of the moth in the candle flame (Attar) Image by Mabel Amber from Pixabay
Ooh! Love the last stanza, Christine!
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Thanks so much Punam. I always appreciate your kind words ☺️💕🥰
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My pleasure, always. 🥰
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When we are young and beautiful we should seek out other young and beautiful and celebrated together. When we become old our wisdom grows deeper we find it more satisfying to be with one who shares our understanding of life. When we’re lucky it turns out to be the same person – that’s not always the case though unfortunately. Great poem Christine.
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Thanks Rob. The line I used just reminded me that we leave no footprint per se. We are just passing through and wisdom is acquired along the way. I never have regrets and luckily I have let go of old stuff long ago. Yes like you I am with the one who understands me and vice versa ☺️
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You wove in the waterbird well here and I especially liked:
“Many will lose their grasp
and happiness slips away
over and over”
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Thank you so much Laura. I’m happy you liked it ☺️
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Love this! I especially resonate with; “Scars remain of memories faded/Dissolving in the lake of recollection.” Poignant, arresting and worth a countless reads 🙂
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Oh you’re too kind Sanaa! Thank you so very much ☺️❤️
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What’s sad is when the old and wise choose the young and lovely thinking to renew their youth! I like your poem very much!
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Oh my gosh, yes! Isn’t that the saddest thing. Thanks for reading Bev. I’m happy you like it. 🥰
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“Only the most fortunate
can hold on to the gift
bestowed on them”
Yes.
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Agreed Ken. Sometimes you don’t know what you have when it looks you in the face 😕
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don’t leave a trace
only ripples of once was… and maybe that is enough
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Yes, perhaps Debi. It takes a long time to get to that point ☺️
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Well, and I am almost 70, so it has been a long time for me. Smile
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You don’t look it ☺️ Have a wonderful day Debi. Thanks for stopping by and I wish you a Happy Holiday Season.
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And to you and yours, Christine
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Ending your poem with the challenge line was brilliant … really enjoyed this.
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Thanks Helen 💕 You are so kind ☺️
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I like how you used that line, Christine. And one day even those ripples will be smooth, which is a comforting thought.
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Thanks Lisa. I always appreciate your kind words 🥰
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My pleasure, Christine.
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Youth is such a bad judgement of character… which is what really matters in the end.
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Yes Bjorn. Like the expression- “we don’t know what we don’t know”.
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