Water

Posted byChristine BoltonPosted inBlog, Passion

Water

Every evening when the sun hangs low 
I go to the river’s edge to reminisce and cry
It is there that we would sit and talk
about anything and everything
I had been besotted with her
 
Since she has been lost to me
Time has passed slowly
And memories stay vivid
Grateful, I sit and dream
of how it might have been

Before she disappeared without a trace
I had loved her deeply
Asking for her to marry me but
she had resisted over and over
Making excuses, needing time to think
 
She had visited less after that day
Avoiding me most likely
I became despondent and sad
Imploring her to come for a swim
Just one more time I begged

She reluctantly agreed
and was a wary of me
I did not pay much heed
Once we were in the water
I begged her marry me, please! 

She ignored my pleading
I placed my hands on her shoulders
pushing her down
Holding her under the water
Until she drowned
 
 
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Ingrid is guest host at D'Verse Poets tonight and has prompted
us with Exploring the Narrative Voice.

The challenge is to write a poem in the voice of a fictional character.
It can be any character you like, and you can introduce it in your own
voice if you choose (à la Coleridge, though I certainly wouldn’t insist
on this) but the main body of the poem must be in the voice of your
character. If you wish, you can write a dramatic monologue, such as
My Last Duchess by Robert Browning; or create a spirit voice through
whom your poem speaks, as in Stevie Smith’s The River God. The choice
is yours: I want you to experiment with fiction in your poetry.

I am presenting a reworked poem from 2018.  I think it fits the
prompt.

Image by No-longer-here from Pixabay 

Published by Christine Bolton

I have been writing poetry since I was a child and it has helped in the good times and bad times. I am always looking within to find the answers to life's problems and to write thought-provoking poetry and prose. Thanks for checking it out. Christine

26 thoughts on “Water”

  3. Oh wow, Christine I was not expecting the twist! It’s so interesting how in some peoples’ minds love and murder go hand in hand!

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    1. Thanks Lisa. Yes I agree although I couldn’t quite get the female to do the murdering! 😳👍

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  4. This is so dark and sinister Christine! It fits the prompt perfectly, thank you 🙂 How unrequited love turns bitter and then deadly…

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  6. What a dark tale! It rushes along to the climax, drawing us along with your words. Well done.

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    1. No I did not know it but I just watched the video. Oh yes, most similar apart from the rock. Quite creepy really 😦

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  11. This is incredibly dark and potent, Christine! I love how elegantly you have carried out the theme of love gone wrong 💝💝

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    1. Thank you Sanaa. It’s fun to go to the dark side in our writing every now and again ☺️

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