
Imperfect Pair
In the beginning with love’s first blush of giddy heartbeat and butterfly stomach, words full of shyness and best behavior are shared No one else exists In this euphoria-filled magic kingdom for two A single moment apart Could send one or the other reeling into a cloud of self-doubt and suspicion Is it really love you feel or just infatuation? You know that without the other, unbearable as it may seem, absence makes the heart grow fonder and love grows But when pixie dust settles and the gilded rose fades familiarity becomes contemptuous Separations inevitable and wished for More frequent and preferred Talk is straight and deflowered and before you can say What happened? It is out of sight and out of mind Copyright © 2021 Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing All Rights Reserved Merril is hosting D'Verse Poets tonight and she has prompted us with 'Proverbs'. She points out that many are contradictory, when you think about it. We are to choose one or two and write a poem using one or both. My choices were: Absence makes the heart grow fonder Out of sight, out of mind Photo by Kelly Sikkema on Unsplash
This is so beautiful Christine.
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Thanks Sadje ☺️🌺💕
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You’re welcome ☺️
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Wonderfully described trajectory of infatuation, Christine. I love this turn:
“But when pixie dust settles
and the gilded rose fades”
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Thanks Lisa! I’m happy you liked it ☺️💕
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You’re most welcome, Christine.
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you have some lovely descriptions on this proverbial journey from new to cold love,
“Talk is straight and deflowered” especially remarkable
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Thanks Laura. I’m happy you liked it ☺️
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Excellent reconstruction of multiple proverbs.
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Thanks Ron! I really appreciate it ☺️
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Love the force of both hitting each square in the face! Well done.
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Aww thanks Helen. I always thought proverbs were such a contradiction. In a weird way it encourages us to look at things from both sides ☺️💕🌺
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I’ve performed in that scenario often. Love cn, and should blossom without pixie dust.
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It certainly should Glenn. Thanks for stopping by ☺️🌺
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This is absolutely exquisite, Christine! Such strong use of language here especially; “Talk is straight and deflowered.”💝💝
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Thank you Sanaa. I really appreciate that ☺️💕🌺
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So true of love and many relationships–a “gilded flower” and then “Talk is straight and deflowered.” Excellent!
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Thank you Merril ☺️
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You’re welcome! 💙
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How true the contradiction, Christine! You picked the most appropriate. These are two most quoted in teenage years!
Hank
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Thanks Hank ☺️ Ah yes, I remember those years well 😦💔
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Two very interesting proverbs standing poles apart and yet they also go hand in hand when it comes to matters of the heart and the beginnings and endings of love affairs. Nice work! 🙂
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Thank you Sunra ☺️ I find it so interesting that so many proverbs are poles apart. I think they just show us there are always two sides to everything 💕🌺
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Truth 👌☀️
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Just reading this lovely poem now Christine, its fab! Well done on it you did a great job!
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Thank you dear Carol anne ☺️💕
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