
Without a Trace
Footprints stolen by the sea Voices drowned by gulls Words carried away in protest on salty winds The beach keeps its secrets of ghosts from the past Sweeping away remnants of life and love without a trace until there’s nothing left but pristine sand Although here among the driftwood and starfish, your essence lingers still Your presence is felt, always Copyright © 2022 Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing All Rights Reserved Sarah from Sarahsouthwest is hosting Tuesday night at D'Verse and she has prompted us with Lost Valentines "lost loves, your broken loves, your loves that never were! The fireworks that didn’t quite go off, the bud that never opened, the seed that failed to sprout." This is a poem I wrote a couple of years ago Image by Christina1966 from Pixabay
Great use of the prompts in this lovely poem
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Thank you so much Sadje 🥰
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You’re welcome 😉
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Wow!! So Awesome Christine!! I love the emotions, feelings and wistful images!!! Is this your expansion of your Haiku? Seems like it?? I’m so glad you expanded on that gem!! Bellissimo, My Dear, Bellissimo!!
xoxo
💕😘🌹😍
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Yes this was the expansion of the Haiku. Very similar to your lovely poem Chuck 🥰❤️
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I so love this, Christine! So happy you decided to expand this!! Loved your line – “Footprints stolen
by the sea” – Bellissimo, My Dear!!
xoxo
😁💕🌹
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WOW! Remarkable and haunting. Very beautiful poetry, as always. ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
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Oh so sweet Lucy. You know I really appreciate your kind words. My poetry is so different from yours and I find yours very exciting and wild! ☺️
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Supremely visual…and lovely description..the sea stealing footprints…stunning, and the other lines too. The atmosphere around the words is so strong, like the tide itself, pulling..
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Thank you Ain. I’m so appreciative of your lovely comments. ☺️💕
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The visual imagery here is wonderful! The first stanza had a slight feel of people arguing, or at least discussing intensely – and then the loss in the second stanza and the almost resolution in the end. It’s finely crafted.
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Oh thank you so much Sarah! I’m so happy you liked it. Yes you read it correctly ☺️💕
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“The beach keeps its secrets of ghosts from the past,”.. yes, yes! Such an exquisitely woven poem, Christine! 💝💝
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Thank you Sanaa ☺️💕 So happy you liked it!
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Lovely.
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Thanks so much ☺️💕
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I love the metaphor of the imprint in the sand: so easy to erase, but a trace forever lingers!
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Thank you so much Ingrid ☺️💕
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I love your images in this one. The sea is such a great metaphor for life! I like the driftwood memories still lingering!
Dwight
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Yes! Thanks Dwight ☺️
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You are welcome!
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The imagery here is fantastic!
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Thank you! I appreciate it ☺️💕
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The way you describe the beach as all what is left in the sand is like so many things in life that we have lost.
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Thank you ☺️
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Without the Sea, we are nothing. With the Sea, we are everything. Wonderful piece Christine!
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Thank you Ami ☺️💕
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