
Spoken Word
Beneath billowy clouds We lay together on a red tartan blanket Sated from our picnic lunch The warmth of sun on skin and sweet summer wine on lips Wildflowers he picked and carefully threaded into my hair Heady, hypnotic moments As butterflies danced and dragonflies hovered All in the golden afternoon I hear the three voices Loud and clear His, speaking of his love for me Mine, repeating his words back but inaudibly so he would not hear Then that of my conscience as always, keeping me silent and so his words will remain just echoes in my mind and the events of this day only memories Copyright © 2022 Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing All Rights Reserved Sanaa is hosting D'Verse Poets and has prompted us with choosing three Lewis Carroll poems from the list she provided and weave them into a poem of our own. I chose: Echoes The Three Voices All in the Golden Afternoon
So beautiful Christine
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Thanks dear Sadje ☺️💕
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You’re welcome
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just echoes in my mind
and the events of this day
only memories
Love your close Christine. It’s a classic anti-climax to the earlier stanzas!
Hank
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Hi Hank! Thanks so much ☺️💕
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Oh so lovely Christine
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Thank you Mich ☺️💕
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Ooh, that ending! It contrasts beautifully with thr opening lines.
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Thanks Punam. This was one where I really didn’t know where I was going with the prompt’s poem titles 😦 I’m happy it worked 👍❤️
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It worked beautifully. You are welcome. 😊❣️
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This is absolutely STUNNING, Christine 😀 I love the stream of consciousness flowing in this poem especially; “Wildflowers he picked and carefully/Threaded Into my hair/Heady, hypnotic moments/As butterflies danced.” You made my day! Thank you so much for writing to the prompt 💝💝💝💝
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Thank you so much Sanaa. You made it easy fr us with your lovely prompts. ☺️❤️
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This wonderful scene made me think of Alice just before she plunges into the rabbit hole
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Yes! It was not intentional but you’re right. Thanks Bjorn ☺️
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It sounds like she wasn’t that into him[?] A great write!
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Thanks Carol. I just think she was overly cautious maybe! ☺️💕
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Keeping her cards close, delightful read.
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Thank you Paul ☺️
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Very realistic, but it makes me want to shout – no – don’t stay quiet!
-David
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Yes, she is overly cautious! Thanks David ☺️💕
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Absolutely stunning
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Thank you Anita! ☺️💕
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