
My Journey
Looking back at the place from where I had come I see the crooked road travelled At times losing my way and falling victim to those wishing me harm Paying the price of my naïveté Other times hitting road blocks From choices made without intelligence Wisdom not yet in residence But I keep going and the road straightens when sharing the pavement The distractions lessen and the weight of carriage shared smooths bumps in the road Look further on ahead, there between truth and falsehood, a little empty space. It is there that I know I have arrived Copyright © 2022 Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing All Rights Reserved Punam from PaensUnplugged is guest hosting D’Verse Poets tonight and has shared some of the beautiful works of Amrita Pritan. Punam asked us to choose one of the lines she picked from Pritan's poems, and use it as an epigraph for our poem or as a springboard. The line I chose was: Look further on ahead, there between truth and falsehood, a little empty space
Beautiful integration of the prompt line Christine
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Thank you dear Sadje ☺️💕
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You’re welcome Christine
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We all have arrived at the road of our destinies facing so much and we should be proud of our journey.💕❤
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Yes Laiba. That is a great observation ☺️💕
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Indeed Christine❤
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Our journeys sometimes are unexpectedly bumpy. I like your interpretation of the line you have chosen. It promises of smooth times ahead. ❤️😊
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Thanks Punam. ☺️💕 They do say “The Journey is the destination”
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So it is. You are so welcome. ❤️
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It sounds like an exhausting journey, but I am glad you made it.
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Thanks Jim. Yes, I’m quite worn out from it 🤣
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Seamless, Christine, how you’ve included the line that inspired your write. I like the analogy of the bumpy road smoothing out in the end 🙂
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Thank you Sunra. I think it depends who you travel it with ☺️💕
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A journey that took courage and perseverance. Cheers!
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Thanks Grace☺️💕
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The journey in all its rawness, the pain and the truth, acceptance, yet a place to arrive ahead, somber and encouraging.
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Thanks Paul. ☺️💕
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Very welcome Christine
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Wonderful insightful piece Christine — excellent writing my friend!
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So kind of you Rob. I always appreciate it!
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