Would that those spiteful words Be unsaid So my cracked heart stings no more Had I not seen you then surely my happiness would still be in tact Our love song was unsung I accepted the ending and have only myself to blame That ship had sailed You had slipped from sight beneath the waves of life’s disorder and I pulled you back to the surface Can a sight be unseen? Can words ever be unheard?
I have been writing poetry since I was a child and it has helped in the good times and bad times. I am always looking within to find the answers to life's problems and to write thought-provoking poetry and prose.
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Christine
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Really loved this! I think the answer to the questions in your last lines is – “not unless you have that thingy like they had in Men In Black – you know the flasher thing” LOL 😊🌹💕
Chuck I don’t know what happened to my first response. I coukd have sworn I sent it 😐. Thank you for your kind comments. I didnt see Men in Black so i don’t know. 🤣💕
Oh my heart this is so poignant! I love the progression of this poem from “Our love song was unsung,” to “Can words ever be unheard?” .. the memories are always bittersweet aren’t they? 💘
Poignant
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Thank you ☺️💕
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You’re welcome
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Extremely heartfelt and moving Christine. ❤️
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Thank you Gypsie-Ami ☺️💕
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Really loved this! I think the answer to the questions in your last lines is – “not unless you have that thingy like they had in Men In Black – you know the flasher thing” LOL 😊🌹💕
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Chuck I don’t know what happened to my first response. I coukd have sworn I sent it 😐. Thank you for your kind comments. I didnt see Men in Black so i don’t know. 🤣💕
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Oh my, you missed a fun movie!! Well if you don’t want to see the movie here is a link to a scene with the gadget in action.
😁😍
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I think the saying is similar to the old – You can’t unring a bell?
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Very poignant verse, the questions are spot on in terms of those ‘we’ ask when something has ended.
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Thanks Bernadette. Yes! So many “what ifs”
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Thank you Bernadette. ☺️💕
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It’s really heartbreaking ⭐💫
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Yes, it certainly can be, right? 💕😢
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Yup. Right🌸⭐
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Oh my heart this is so poignant! I love the progression of this poem from “Our love song was unsung,” to “Can words ever be unheard?” .. the memories are always bittersweet aren’t they? 💘
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Tvsnn you dear Sanaa for your lovely comments. I’m so happy you liked it ☺️❤️
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Oh k never saw that movie so I trust what you said 🤣 Thanks Chuck 💕
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Heartbreak is a lot like drowning.
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Yes thats true isn’t it 😐
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Heartbreakingly beautiful, Christine! ❤️
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Thanks so much dear Punam ☺️💕
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