
Rules of Engagement
Darkness lives in corners where spiders hide undisturbed and dust gathers secrets protected by blankets of mystery I stumble in confusion Why did I not know sooner? Climbing over discarded baggage scattered without thought and blocking advancement Wishing to tear down the emotional scaffolding holding up your life Unable to comprehend the rules of engagement I become weary from trying and fall on my own sword A breath, then another, realizing I have become an impediment Copyright © 2023 Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing All Rights Reserved Sanaa is hosting the bar at D’Verse tonight and she has prompted us with Line Messaging Poetry. In her words: “For today’s MTB challenge, I invite you all to try out this new poetic form. Be philosophical, somber or serious, show us your playful side or even better, be romantic! The choice is yours”
Oh my heart this is painstakingly deep and honest, Christine! The rules can be a bit hazy sometimes. Thank you so much for writing to the prompt 💖💖
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I should have practiced a little more. Some of the other poems were outstanding. Thanks for your kind words Sanaa ☺️❤️
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Raw but really good, Christine.
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It was a bit raw wasn’t it? Oh dear. I need t lighten uo! LOL ☺️ Thanks Lynn 💕
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Poets delve into all the emotions!
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☺️❤️
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Beautifully written Christine
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Thank you my friend ☺️💕
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You’re most welcome
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I agree about the rawness of this poem, Christine, but I was more taken by the image of someone ‘Climbing over discarded baggage / scattered without thought /and blocking advancement’, which we all do to different degrees, and some more than others. The final lines are just so sad.
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Thanks Kim. Like many, I write to heal, so sometimes my poetry can be on the dark side. 😦 Next one will be sunnier I’m sure ☺️💕👍
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Thank you for this ❤
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Thank you for stopping by ☺️💕
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“The emotional scaffolding holding up your life”–brilliant.
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Thank you. I really appreciate it. ☺️💕
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This is so very tight and strong… the image of failure in the end so particularly strong.
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Thank you Bjorn. I appreciate that very much ☺️
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