
Your fall from the stars
as surprising as an apple dropping from a tree
Unexpected, startling
A gift from nowhere
A present to savor
Will the apple stay fresh for a while
Or was it bruised by its fall?
I look beneath the skin to discover
a fresh, sweet surprise
bringing a smile to my face
I like what I see
This lucky find
will continue to ripen
No need to devour it
all at once
Time to enjoy its beauty
Taste its lusciousness
and relish the organic maturation
Your fall from the stars truly
Serendipitous
and a gift from the Gods
Copyright © 2024 Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing
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Mish is hosting Open Link Night at D’Verse Poets. I have chosen to go with one of her mini prompts and write about the life of a fruit as a metaphor for a relationship.
It’s a perfect metaphor, Christine; I found myself smiling and comparing my own relationship as I read it. It was a sweet treat for me this morning during a coffee break from work.
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Thanks Kim. Yes, I rushed in before so perhaps next time I will let it ripen to see if I actully enjoy the taste! 🤣😳💗
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You made me laugh out loud this time!
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Well that’s good! ☺️ Have a great day Kim!
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Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous write ❤️❤️
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You are so sweet Sanaa! Thank you ☺️🩷
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So beautiful Christine
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Thank you dear friend ☺️🩷
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You’re most welcome
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Christine, wonderful metaphor for relationship.
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Thank you Lisa! I’m happy you thought so ☺️🩷
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You’re welcome.
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Wonderful!
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Thank you VJ. So nice to know you are still there ☺️🩷
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You are welcome, Christine. It was good to see your work again.
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Thanks VJ. That means a lot to me. I fear I am a little rusty 😕
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Not at all!
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I love the simile in the opening lines, Christine, and the way it developed into an extended metaphor. Apples may be a simple fruit to some, but they have such significance, and are a perfect way to pay tribute to a relationship.
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Thank you so much Kim. I am happy you liked it ☺️💕
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My pleasure, Christine!
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Beautiful. Sometimes love ripens slowly.
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Thanks Mish ☺️
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A lovely catch Christine 😊😍🌏
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What a wonderful metaphor, Christine! Such gifts are to be savoured leisurely. ❤️
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Thank you Punam. You’re so kind ☺️💕
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Yes, to savour and not devour, speaks volumes.
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It’s all about patience. Trouble is it can take a lifetime
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Ah yes indeed, patience, patience, patience
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