Mish is hosting Open Link Night at D'Verse This is a poem for anyone who is coping with the loss of a loved one. Hoping you find some comfort in my words. 💔
I have been writing poetry since I was a child and it has helped in the good times and bad times. I am always looking within to find the answers to life's problems and to write thought-provoking poetry and prose.
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Christine
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Grief, unlike any other emotion, never truly goes away. A thought, a smell, a day can trigger that moment of grief in its totality, leaving echoes of the pain behind until the next remembrance is awakened again. ((Hugs)) Gypsie-Ami
Thanks Gypsie-Ami. Yes that is it exactly no matter what kind of loss. Somehow the words just poured out of me. It was as if I was channeling someone. Hugs back to you 🥰
A stunning poem, Christine, which touched me deeply. It’s so comforting to think of loved ones still there. There is so much to love about this, I can only pick out a couple of lines:
‘You are the twinkling of the stars And the bite of a winter freeze’;
‘You are the tickle in my nose And the song an early bird sings’;
and especially, as I think my mother does this from time to time:
‘A feather dropped where I will see it Prompting me to be strong’.
Dear Kim, thank you so much. I find it comforting just to think that we are left messages by way of feathers. I know how I feel when I see one. It is always picked up and brought home ☺️
Beautiful
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Thanks so much VJ 🥰
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Welcome, Christine
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“A feather dropped where I will see it”… lovely. You’ve captured the omnipresence of grief beautifully.
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Thanks so much Kim 🥰
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Grief, unlike any other emotion, never truly goes away. A thought, a smell, a day can trigger that moment of grief in its totality, leaving echoes of the pain behind until the next remembrance is awakened again.
((Hugs)) Gypsie-Ami
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Thanks Gypsie-Ami. Yes that is it exactly no matter what kind of loss. Somehow the words just poured out of me. It was as if I was channeling someone. Hugs back to you 🥰
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So beautiful Christine
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Aww, thanks Sadje 🥰
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You’re most welcome
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Christine, your verse is exquisite and profoundly comforting.
Thank you for sharing such a beautiful message with us. ♡
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Thank you Nancy. You are so kind. I really appreciate it ❤️
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Very welcome, Christine. Wishing you a good night. 🫶🏼
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Oh my! Amazing poetry, Christine. So comforting 🩵🔥✍🏾
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Oh dear Jude, thank you! How lovely to hear from you. I hope you are well my friend 🥰
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A stunning poem, Christine, which touched me deeply. It’s so comforting to think of loved ones still there. There is so much to love about this, I can only pick out a couple of lines:
‘You are the twinkling of the stars
And the bite of a winter freeze’;
‘You are the tickle in my nose
And the song an early bird sings’;
and especially, as I think my mother does this from time to time:
‘A feather dropped where I will see it
Prompting me to be strong’.
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Dear Kim, thank you so much. I find it comforting just to think that we are left messages by way of feathers. I know how I feel when I see one. It is always picked up and brought home ☺️
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You’re most welcome, Christine.
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Stunning writing 💕
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Thank you so much Maggie. Youre very kind 🥰
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It is a pleasure Christine 😘
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Oh, so beautiful–and so poignant. You’ve captured grief, how you can see the beauty and still ache so much.
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Thank you Merrill. So kind. I think seeing the beauty takes time and it becomes is the comforting part of healing 🥰
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You’re very welcome, Christine. Yes, I think so. 💙
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Such sadness and still comfort to have the one we lost being there somewhere.
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Thank you Bjorn ☺️
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Breathtaking. Grief, love…is all of this.
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Thank you so much Mish 🥰
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