Laura is hosting D’Verse tonight and our challenge is to write in the poetry form devised by Karan Naidu, which he called a Parallelogram de Crystalline (apparently dedicated to his soulmate, Crystal Rose)
Poetry Rules: Despite the titular length it is quite simple and short!
• 12 lines in total (each Capitalised but without punctuation) • 4 verses • 3 lines per verse • syllable count per verse 3,6,9 • unrhymed
Poetry Theme: the beauty of a (real or imaginary) lover as compared with and described in images of nature. (Crystalline literally means very clear or bright, therefore, keep the complementary images crisp.)
I have been writing poetry since I was a child and it has helped in the good times and bad times. I am always looking within to find the answers to life's problems and to write thought-provoking poetry and prose.
Thanks for checking it out.
Christine
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22 thoughts on “All Of You”
A romantic poem, Christine, and true to the form. I love the ‘embroidered blanket of sequins’ metaphor.
A romantic poem, Christine, and true to the form. I love the ‘embroidered blanket of sequins’ metaphor.
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Thank you Kim. I’m happy you liked it. I love counting syllables so it was a ‘friendly’ form for me 🥰
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My pleasure, Christine.
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So beautiful in its entirety, … an all encompassing love, …💫
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Thank you Penn. I appreciate it very much 🥰
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A beautiful poem my friend
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Thanks dear Sadje ☺️❤️
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Most welcome
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such a tender romantic poem Christine – the 2nd stanza especially touching
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Thank you so much Laura. I really enjoyed the form. 🥰
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So beautiful Christine 💕
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Hi Maggie. Thanks so much. I’m happy you liked it 🥰
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Hi Christine ❤️
My pleasure always.
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This is lovely. So romantic and powerful
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Thank you so much ☺️🩷
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Definitely a keeper! described so tenderly and delightfully Carol…
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Thank you 🥰
Christine
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The joy of a spring lamb, love that comparison
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Thank you! 🥰
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Beautifully expressed, Christine.
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Thank you so much, Carol 🥰
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I love how you incorporated seasons into your poem, Christine!
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