In the stillness of the morning I see her again The woman in black Standing on the rocks in silence Staring at the sea motionless The breeze lifting her hair and leaving it to tousle about her shoulders Whenever I come at this time she is there Never acknowledging my presence Absorbed in her thoughts and quietness I smile nervously but she looks through me As if I were transparent I speak but she does not hear It was then I realized I was looking at myself The woman in black was me My head was always in the future instead of being in the present I was mourning the loss of something I would never have unless I started living
I have been writing poetry since I was a child and it has helped in the good times and bad times. I am always looking within to find the answers to life's problems and to write thought-provoking poetry and prose.
Thanks for checking it out.
Christine
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22 thoughts on “Living in the Present”
Wow, this is Brilliant, Christine…and familiar, as somewhere in my files I have something similar. I So enjoy your writing–makes my heart hum an echo 🙂
I recently tried to find all the old poems…it’s an arduous task, as apparently I’m way less organized than I thought! Disks and flash drives…aarrgghh 🙂
Wow, this is Brilliant, Christine…and familiar, as somewhere in my files I have something similar. I So enjoy your writing–makes my heart hum an echo 🙂
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That’s great Avia. You must share it. I would love to read it 🙂
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I recently tried to find all the old poems…it’s an arduous task, as apparently I’m way less organized than I thought! Disks and flash drives…aarrgghh 🙂
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Hopefully you’ll find them 🙂💕
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I will find some 🙂
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Christine this is such an amazing poem. We do waste a lot of now, regretting what may happen!
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Thank you so much Sadje. That means a lot to me. 🙂💕
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It’s my pleasure 😇
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This is wonderful, Christine! 🙂💞
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Thank you Punam. I’m so grateful 🙂💕
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You are so welcome, my dear! 🙂❤️
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Those last few lines, Christine, are just perfect.
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Thanks so much Sue!
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I love this poem, Christine.
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Thank you Roberta. I’m happy you liked it 🙂💕
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Beautiful!
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Truly wonderful Christine!! 😊
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Thank you my dear Beckie. It means a lot 🙂
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Always a pleasure, Christine! 😊
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There’s a mystical feel to this.
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Yes! Hope you liked it 🙂
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