
Acid Trip
The sky cries its tears of acid rain
and the earth screams out in constant pain
Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing ©
Frank is hosting D'Verse Poets tonight
and has prompted us with a Couplet.
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The sky cries its tears of acid rain
and the earth screams out in constant pain
Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing ©
Frank is hosting D'Verse Poets tonight
and has prompted us with a Couplet.
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two very powerful lines, a description of our challenging times, earth is sending a message, are we listening and doing something?
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Sadly only some listen 😢
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kaykuala
The sky cries its tears of acid rain
and the earth screams out in constant pain
How cruel can it be. It rightfully reflects the current problems the world is facing. Well thought out Christine!
Hank
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Thank you so much Hank 🙂
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WOW. A powerful couplet.
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Thanks Beverly ☺️
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A poignant piece Christine….. maybe this song…..
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Thank you dear Ivor 🙂
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Short but. very nice
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Yes, a couplet! 🙂 Thanks
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A great couplet!
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Thanks Dwight 🙂
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I imagine there must be some pain for the earth coming from that kind of rain.
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Pain for all of us Frank. I liked your prompt today 🙂
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Why do we harm our mother so? 😦
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Selfishness, greed, indifference etc. etc 😢
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Very powerful couplet. Thank you. I was wondering what this would be when I read the title. 😀
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Haha, yes! Thanks Merril ☺️
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😀
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This is so we’ll written. A bit scary
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Sadly it’s true 😢
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This packs a punch in 2 little lines!
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I was hoping it would 🙂💕
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This cuts to the quick. (K)
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Yes, I’m afraid so 😢
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Thankfully the acid rain is less so these days… there are things that have improved
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A small blessing ☺️
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