I have been writing poetry since I was a child and it has helped in the good times and bad times. I am always looking within to find the answers to life's problems and to write thought-provoking poetry and prose.
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Christine
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32 thoughts on “Dawn”
Wonderful images created by your words. Very vivid.
Wonderful images created by your words. Very vivid.
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Thank Sadje 🥰
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You’re welcome 😉
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Love the imagery….especially “shaken like a carpet”!
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Thank you Punam ☺️❤️
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You are welcome, Christine. 🙂
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Wonderful. Your poem plays out that early morning experience so well 🙂
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Thanks Chris ☺️
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Lovely use of imaging!
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Thanks so much ☺️
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Vivid imagery, Christine: the flock of starlings shaken like a carpet and the moodiness of the landscape crying for relief.
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Thanks Kim. I really enjoyed this prompt ☺️
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I’m always going to think of this brilliant line when I see murmurations
“shaken like a carpet”
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Thanks so much Laura. It always reminds me of that when they are startled ☺️
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Vivid imagery, paired perfectly with that photo. Excellent!
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Thanks so much Frank. I love creating a picture ☺️
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wonderful words
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Thanks so much Debi 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much 🥰
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I like your images in this poem, both real and metaphorical!
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Thank you Dwight ☺️
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The birds all flying like that is called a murmuration and it’s fantastic to watch. Love the poetry!
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That’s right! I’m happy liked it John ☺️
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The first two lines of each stanza provide some great imagery.
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Thanks Ken. I appreciate it ☺️
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Love the image of the flock of starlings shaken like a carpet…
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Thank you so much ☺️
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Beautiful imagery. (K)
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Thanks so much 🥰
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Ominous and desolate landscape that definitely could use some brightening.
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It’s always the darkest before the dawn 😦 🙂💕
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