
Tiptoe Through the Tulips
After last night’s storm the tulip petals are strewn across the patio where they mortally fluttered The stems lay where they were thrown Deflowered, Dead-headed as they landed in his face falling ingloriously at his feet Pistil and stamen in tact Naked tulips The deep violet petals took flight Descending to the ground in slow motion The storm, a tempest in a tea cup Coming from nowhere with a whipping wind stirring things up that are better left alone, Words cannot be unsaid The previous night’s debris a sad reminder that not only flowers die Copyright © 2022 Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing All Rights Reserved Linda Lee Lyberg is hosting Poetics tonight at D’Verse and has prompted us to start our poem with a line from James Harrison’s Songs Of Unreason Here are the eight lines to choose from: I chose the last one “There is a human wildness held beneath the skin.”- Arts, Jim Harrison “He went to sea in a thimble of poetry.”- Poet Warning, Jim Harrison “In truth each day is a universe in which we are tangled in the light of stars.”- Horses, Jim Harrison “I don’t know what happens after death but I’ll have to chance it.”- Desert Snow, Jim Harrison “Yes, in the predawn black the slim slip of the waning moon.”- Remote Friends, Jim Harrison “Some days in March are dark and some altogether glittery and loud with birds.”- March in Patagonia, AZ, Jim Harrison “We’re doubtless as old as our mothers, thousands of generations waiting for the sunlight.”- Sunlight, Jim Harrison “After last night’s storm the tulip petals are strewn across the patio where they mortally fluttered.”- Church, Jim Harrison
Flower as metaphor for relationship works well here, Christine.
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Thanks Lisa ☺️💕
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You’re welcome 🙂 ❤
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You comparison of flowers and personal relationships works very well in your poem!
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Thanks so much Dwight ☺️💕
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You are welcome!
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Strong symbolism in broken flowers and broken trust.
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Thanks Sadje ☺️💕
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You’re welcome Christine
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You carried the metaphor very well, loved your take on the prompt! 🙂
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Thanks so much M Jay ☺️
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Fan-tastic, Christine!
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David
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Thank you so much David! ☺️💕
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Your words are so lovely Christine.What a perfect way to end:
‘Words cannot be unsaid
The previous night’s debris
a sad reminder that
not only flowers die’
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Thank you Linda! Wonderful prompt lines from you. Thank you ☺️💕
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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Beautiful imagery!
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Thank you so much. I appreciate that ☺️💕
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Thank you so much David! ☺️💕
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Oh that closing tugs on my heart, Christine! Gorgeously rendered 💝💝
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Thanks dear Sanaa! ☺️❤️
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The use of deflowered and that ending made your whole poem work as a metaphor for the way humans keep hurting each other.
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Thank you! I appreciate it ☺️
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Christine, love this! You owned that line with this beautiful metaphor. ❤️
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Aww, thank you Punam ☺️💕❤️
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My pleasure. 💞😊
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I cannot deny the terrible sadness after reading your poem….even for the tulips first…..and then for the metaphors underneath…..powerful verse…
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Thank you Ain. I appreciate it very much ☺️💕
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The emotion in your beautifully crafted poem is palpable. Wonderful writing.
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Thank you dear Helen ☺️💕 I hope you are doing well.
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Love it 🙂
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Thank you! ☺️
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This is so sad, raw and true Christine!
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Thanks so much Ingrid ☺️💕
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