
City of Lost Souls
The vanilla sky masked a sun desperate to break through Dreariness hung in the air like a wet blanket on hopes never to materialize Remains of life lived lay in derelict piles of rubble Dreams and memories scattered Never to be retrieved The city, a heart without a beat Ghosts of the brave wandering empty streets Searching for lost souls stolen from broken bodies Forever haunting Copyright © 2022 Christine Bolton - Poetry for Healing All Rights Reserved Lynda Lee Lyberg is hosting D’Verse Poets tonight tonight and has prompted us with first lines of a novel. There were twelve to choose from. My pick was: The winter sun, poor ghost of itself, hung milky and wan behind layers of cloud above the huddled roofs of the town.’- Thomas Mann, Tonio Kroger, Penguin, 1955
Powerful and sadly haunting Christine ..
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Ivor, thank you. This was a wonderful timely version of Cohen’s Hallelujah ☺️💕
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Yes it’s very recent version,… I found last week
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A lucky find 💕
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There is immense sadness in your words Christine.
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Thanks Linda. These were wonderful prompts tonight. Thank you! ☺️💕
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My pleasure!
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The grief that never ends.
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Seems that way doesn’t it 😢
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………………hard even to make a comment……one of the very best, but also most important poems I have read…
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Thank you Ain. I do hope you are safe ☺️☮️
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My heart goes out to those weary displaced travelers.
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Me too Lisa. The Ukrainians have been so strong. 💕
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A great poem of sadness and haunting as this war drags on and more souls are lost!
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Thanks Dwight. Yes, so sad ☺️💕
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Oh so powerful Christine
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Thank you my friend 😦💕
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You’re welcome ☺️
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Forever haunting indeed. Powerful and moving imagery, Christine.
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Thanks Merrill. War is ugly 😢
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You’re welcome. Indeed it is.
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Such a bleak scenario! Sad and haunting, Christine.
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It is bleak for so many. Thanks Punam 😢
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Indeed. You are welcome.
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That winter sun is a poor consoler for the world today
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Yes. How can you ever make up for those losses? Incredibly sad
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Splendid lines ❤🌹
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Thanks so much ☺️💕
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